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Ringo
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0 posted 2005-03-01 06:38 AM


Since I have hit the proverbial wall on my scribbles, I have decided that what I needed was a bit of introspection. Since XAngel came up with this template originally, and Alicat introduced me to it, I figured that I would re-do it and see what happened...
Here's the challenge:
Fill in the missing blanks of the following poem. IF you have never done it before, it is a good way to suprise yourself, and let the rest of us get to know you better. If you have, then a revisit to see where you have changed might be fun to try.

I AM

I  am (two special characteristics you have)
I wonder (something you are actually curious about)
I hear (an imaginary sound)
I see (an imaginary sight)
I want (an actual desire)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I pretend (something you actually pretend to do)
I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)
I touch (an imaginary touch)
I worry (something that really bothers you)
I cry (something that makes you very sad)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

I understand (something you know is true)
I say (something you believe in)
I dream (something you actually dream about)
I try (something you really make an effort about)
I hope (something you actually hope for)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)


My post is at: /pip/Forum92/HTML/000495.html



In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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1 posted 2005-03-01 09:50 PM


Anything for me "droogie".
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It's wonderful to have you back my friend.

Ringo
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2 posted 2005-03-01 10:44 PM


Thank you for the kind words... I never realized how much I missed it until I came back (lol).
Your write was absolutely superb... as if there was ever a question.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

littlewing
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3 posted 2005-03-02 12:33 PM


There ya go, good choice, I needed this.
Thank you.
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Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-03-02 08:17 AM


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excellent Challenge Ringo, I thank you very much....

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2005-03-02 04:34 PM


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Thanks, enjoyed participating in this challenge.

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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6 posted 2005-03-19 06:48 AM


This is my response to the challenge, Ringo.
/pip/Forum92/HTML/001070.html

Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2005-03-19 08:43 AM


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Introspection is always good...

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8 posted 2005-03-19 09:50 AM


This challenge always amazes me. It never seems to die, and the efforts are always so amazing.
You have all done a superb job with it.
Thanks for playing.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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9 posted 2005-03-19 11:24 AM


/pip/Forum92/HTML/001011.html

Forgot I was supposed to leave the url here.

AND.....we have a super pic of Ringo!!!!

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10 posted 2005-03-19 09:47 PM


Ringo...I do hope it is ok to do an I Am for another...
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11 posted 2005-03-20 05:50 AM


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I hope I do this cutty/pastey thing right. It's a good thing I love you mister! Make me get all thinky and such.....sakes.

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Saluting with misty eyes
12 posted 2005-03-20 10:30 AM


Sunshine... PLEASE do as many of these as you would like. You are talented enough to have us read them all.

In the wooden chair
Beside my window
I wear a face born in the falling rain

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