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I Am (Ringos Challenge)
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I Am (Ringos Challenge) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I AM I am simple and gentle I wonder if the world will ever find peace I hear the flutter of angel wings I see the shores of forever more I want truth and honesty I am simple and gentle I pretend that the sun is always shining I feel the dark of night I touch stars hanging in the sky I worry if I will raise my child right I cry when disapointed I am simple and gentle I understand that life is a journey I say to enjoy life, it's not a dress rehearsal I dream about tomorrow I try to give love unconditionally I hope the world finds a way to somehow co-exist in peace I am simple and gentle {thank you Ringo, for this challenge.} wait a minute, nah, still nothing.... my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh, your are FAR from simple, missy. gentle, yes . . . *smile* this is beautiful, Donna. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I understand that life is a journey I say to enjoy life, it's not a dress rehearsal I dream about tomorrow I try to give love unconditionally ~~ you forgot to say you are beautiful butterfly soaring....   sis....~~*~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol Suzie, rest assured that I used simple in the nicest term of the word hon.  Thanks dear. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
now damn L~ you didnt have to make me tear up..... too.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we are exactly how we believe, and you dear lady are all things great! Tremendous write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh I dunno Lee, if I am or not, but I sure TRY to be.... Hugs you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, thank you, Ringo, for allowing our Gentle Spirit to examine herself again... for allowing us to see how she's grown...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle A delight to read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 each of you! |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
this is a very beautiful poem for the challenge. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I worry if I will raise my child right Every parent's worry. You have met this challenge well, and made it very enjoyable for all of us to read. Great Job. In the wooden chair |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful this.. Beautiful you!! Well done..extremely well done. Hugs pretty lady~ ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I understand that life is a journey I say to enjoy life, it's not a dress rehearsal so true and you are beautiful Mxx P.S: seems I am simple too and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you ~Buckingham/Nicks |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ringo Nancy and Maree, thank you each so very much. Hugs. Maree, yep simplicity rules huh?? lmao.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Gentle Spirit..... This poem fits your name perfectly. I'm so glad to know you, sweet Donna. Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I pretend that the sun is always shining I feel the dark of night I touch stars hanging in the sky" ~ Donna, those are a few of the reasons why I love your poetry ~ and you. "I am simple and gentle" ~ and beautifully so, my friend! Hugs with love, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you my friends. Hugzzzzz |
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