Open Poetry #35 |
It's all about choice...an I Am Hopeful for Miss Emily |
Sunshine
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It’s all about choice…an "I Am" Hopeful for Miss Emily… I am at the cusp of life, and searching…and I wonder how my grandmother understands that I hear the magic of every day. I see mysteries that are so high; I want things I cannot even imagine yet, see my hands… I am at the cusp of life and searching I pretend things I do not even know about, as I feel in tune with smiles and I touch hearts easily… I worry about things I cannot yet tell others; I cry easily, for I do not know how to hide my fears, just yet…for I am at the cusp of life, and searching… I understand that my mother and father love me; I say simple things, just now, but I dream of enigmas…and I try to grow a bit each day, physically and mentally…for I hope to fulfill the dreams I cannot yet explain; I am at the cusp of life, and searching… |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness gracious, how precious is this?!!! Karilea the pic is perfect as are your loving words. hugs, Chris You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow. |
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Sunshine
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This is my grandchild, Miss Emily...and the picture was taken by her very adept mother, and our poet, The One & Only.... I love this picture... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aawwwwwwwww this is just PRECIOUS! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!!!! Oh my...I am speechless. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Poetically and pictorally perfect! Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Sissie This poem stoll my heart...so tenderly and lovingly written. The photo, precious as a child. |
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Sunshine
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Thank you, all... She, as are all of my grandchildren, is quite special...ask any grandmother. However, this particular photo spoke aloud with whims and future hope...and I specifically desire that all who gaze upon this, realize that we are only here for those we leave behind... Thank you all...your comments are as precious as this love of mine...and it suits all of her siblings, step and otherwise; as well as her cousins.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
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Jeez Kari, this is a simply beautiful poem and the photo, is just a classic shot. a Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We asked that you write more of you... you answered with this lovely look at a special part of you... Beautiful picture accompanied by words of hope and love...Excellent! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is precious Karilea.....a beautiful gift indeed .... ~~*~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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she will be both poet and photographer... 'tis in the bloodlines. lovely lovely intend of the challenge... lovely gift to miss emily. one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
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boy oh boy, how beautiful this was, would simply love sometime to hear some of those things you see and feel... Kari, this was exceptional, as your spirit... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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ahh...my lil niece then?? awwww. this is PRECIOUS and a |
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Sunshine
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Thank you so much... I come back to this often... and feel her tender moments... |
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