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Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2005-03-17 11:12 PM

I am a seeker of hope and love,
I wonder if anyone hears my hearts truths,
I hear sounds of claws tearing the veil of reality,
I see the future of sanity lost,
I want people to see each others true selves,
I am a seeker of hope and love.

I pretend sometimes that I understand hate,
I feel frustration when judgement flies unchecked,
I touch the soul of those I love,
I worry my son will never learn patience,
I cry when I see others pain,
I am a seeker of hope and love.

I understand faith is a myth,
I say we must give all the chances we feel we've missed,
I dream of a day where no one points and laughs,
I try to keep my mind open to others ideas,
I hope to see my loved ones happy,
I am a seeker of hope and love.

No one really cares,,why should I?

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-03-17 11:55 PM

Sounds like you know who you are ~ and that's a good thing!

I like and admire the kind of person it took to write such a positive poem!

Love & Light,
EA

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

2 posted 2005-03-18 12:08 PM

Enjoyed, thanks for sharing this.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-18 03:12 AM

good write...well done

I might attempt this challenge one day myself

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2005-03-18 07:31 AM

Thanks much for the possitive feedback kids, I took this challenge before back in the stone ages, and its funny, the anwsers seemed to have changed,,,
I'll never grow up (shudders at the very idea), but, I do believe I've learned,,,which is always a good thing,,,,and,,even if you dont do this for a posting here,,,you should do it for yourself,,,go with the first thing that comes to mind,,,dont overthink it,,,,it can be an eye opener about yourself,,,,

hugs,,,,,Michelle

No one really cares,,why should I?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-03-19 09:04 PM

you are a dreamer, a beautiful thing, don't lose that part of you . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-20-2005 05:26 AM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-03-19 09:08 PM

Challenge very well met...
enjoyed the insightful read.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-03-20 04:24 AM

I just read your reply ~ and now I like you even more!!!

EA

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2005-03-20 05:17 AM

littlewing- thank you, I,too, hope I never lose that part of me.

enchantress-glad you liked the peek inside.

EA...thank you very much,,,a very sweet thing to say

No one really cares,,why should I?

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-03-20 07:02 AM

Just as there are different slivers to our psyche, there will always be a day where a response will change. I liked this sliver of light from within, Michelle...thank you.

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