Open Poetry #35 |
I AM (Challenge) |
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique I wonder if others know how vulnerable I feel I hear your soft whispers and know love is real. I see moonbeams, and feel tingly, whenever we kiss I want to live eternally in this moment of bliss. I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique I pretend I am brave, though at times quite afraid I feel your presence beside me even when we're apart I touch the words that you've written..they come from your heart. I worry our 'someday' may never come true I cry for the promises not carried through. I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique I understand and believe in a much higher power I say once again I shall love you forever I have dreams of a very successful endeavor I try to stay positive...keep my feet on the ground I hope a cure for Crohn's soon will be found. I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
YOU are beautiful Nancy... Hugs dear. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am a hopeless romantic, yet very unique yes you are, indeed Lovely and well done! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
What a charming and lovely piece of writing. Well done. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Quite an insight into you, enjoyed. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I love this. This is remarkable. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm right there with you on those important key wishes! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Teed !! This is simply wonderful - as are you. Luv & Miss Ya! You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Nancy, like me and others...you are, and we are and I am... Yuh dun gud gurl... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is enchanting..just like you Nancy Maree and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Beautiful So very nice |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, Dear Enchanting One, you are all that ~ and sooo much more! And I will join you in prayer for a cure for Crohn's Disease. Sending you loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker welcome back. You are indeed unique. And I look forward to reading your wonderful words once again. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Yes Nancy, you are all of those things. And, so much more. I, too, hope they find a cure. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thank you all for responding. A special thank you to Ringo for bringing this challenge back. ~Hugs & Love to you all, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You are a remarkable woman... and I am proud to know you better. *S* This is a beautiful write! *S* And... you do not pray alone, lady. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello my sweet Enchanted Lady. This poem is beautiful, just like you. I miss you, sweet lady. I also am praying with you about the disease. With love and hugs, Ethel |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Enchantress, As you can see by all your responses, you ARE a beautiful and unique enchantress of whom we all adore! Your eye for beauty and smooth, unique description is truly inspiring. My thoughts and prayer I send your way and upward. miscellanea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I, too hope for a cure for Crohns... ~A~ |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
It's posts like this that make me realize just how much I have to learn about writing. Yet another outstanding job by miss Nancy. In the wooden chair |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep on all counts me friend...thanks for sharing yourself. j. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautiful sharing Nancy - as you are - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Nancy? I wonder if others know how vulnerable I feel Yes, but we are all vulnerable here, it is safe, it is home. I adored this and you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...indeed...James |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
i pretend i am brave though at times quite afraid wow,this is something i could really relate to...very well said, enchantress |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Nancy - how wonderfully you write - I just love it - have missed your poems a whole lot - Paul |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are a joy and ever so lovely, the one and only Enchantress!! |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I am glad that I found this one today wanted to see someone else's answer to challange . liked it very much. can relate! adagio |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
You are an inspiration for us all fine lady, wonderfully written and a very enjoyable read!! Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Just wanted to see someone else's answer to the challange.Honest , I thought and very enjoyable |
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