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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-20 06:13 PM

Blue Flame Part 2

Her eyes burning with a brilliant blue fire
Remembering the purpose of this night
All the training it took her to acquire
The sword, The Blue Flame, that was her birthright
Sacrifice for her came without regret
As the women of her lineage prepared
Legend had foretold of the coming threat
That no human on this world would be spared
Still she trembles with a new emotion
While her focus clears and brings into view
Coming across sands in steady motion
What her heart still rejects though her mind knew
Sitting upon a steed of midnight black
Bearing Red Flame to the coming attack

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Blue Flame Part One /pip/Forum51/HTML/001759.html

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-20-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-10-20 06:20 PM

(sigh) Wow, a second chapter for this amazing tale! (smiles) I remember the swords of FireQuest so very well; so many colors of flame and so many powers contributed to them. (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet stark, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2001-10-20 08:14 PM

Yes ... I must agree. This will make a good series for you and you seem to be ready for the battle. **s**

A venture well sought!!!

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-10-20 08:22 PM

Blue vs red, love this.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-10-20 09:56 PM

Stunningly told story.
You have a wonderful way of writing.
Sandra

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

5 posted 2001-10-20 10:11 PM

Gee I think I just may enjoy this mini series

very nice Karen

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-10-21 04:10 PM

And a mighty warrior prepares for the battle.
Sitting atop her steed,  eyes searching a
distant horizon.  Hand clasping the steel
of a determined one.   this is turning into
a sonnet story,  unique, but I think you
are on track....

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

7 posted 2001-10-21 04:31 PM

what a fantastic poem of imagery!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

8 posted 2001-10-22 07:15 PM

She rides!!!!! I really love this, so amazonian/warrior princess. Great stuff!!!
I'm moving to 3!

Sincerely,
Regina

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