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Open Poetry #16

Blue Flame Part 3

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-21 04:02 PM

Blue Flame Part 3

Knowing she must beyond her heart transcend
Fearful that to his power she'll succumb
Her will is strong and does not wish to bend
Legends telling clearly what must be done
That Blue and Red be joined again in war
Still inner battles she must also fight
With love as the key to this ancient lore
To win the war her world did not invite
She looks in eyes of he who holds Red Flame
And seeing there a burning strength of will
Tells he's the one her vision did proclaim
Who takes heart's flame and prophecies fulfill
He reaches out to touch her with his mind
That starts a fire as they become entwined

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Blue Flame Part 1 /pip/Forum51/HTML/001759.html
Blue Flame Part 2 /pip/Forum51/HTML/001802.html

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2001-10-21 06:23 PM

Let me be the first to comment on Part Three
"You have been busy ... the swords of these two feel like they could cut deep. Watch out for the suprising sandstorms, they may have to find cover." **s**

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-10-22 07:20 PM

Suspenseful...and very seductive...the red and blue entwining....They are heating up the place!! Wonderful Karen! An inner battle and fantasy/surreal. Very captivating!

Sincerely,
Regina

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