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Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2003-11-26 11:30 PM

with special thanks to Snow...

Tears fell
as river's rage
once inexorable--
now dammed
(forever damned)
behind a wall
of indifference
drowning
in the numbing calm
of still waters

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2003-11-26 11:32 PM

no thanks to me needed, you wrote this fantastic piece... and i'm happy to have a second chance to read it .

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-11-26 11:34 PM

You wrote of that feeling so poetically.

EA

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-11-26 11:47 PM

Yes, sad to say, sometimes the still waters numb rather than heal.
Good to see you here, Happy Thanksgiving m'friend!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-27 05:39 AM

a sadly beautiful piece, indeed

titch k
Member

since 2003-11-25

Posts 123

5 posted 2003-11-27 05:52 AM

perhaps a wee zen twist to this wonderful write SMILE
loved it!
love Titch

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

6 posted 2003-11-28 04:33 AM

Lady Snow- indeed, I do. without your improv this would never have been... again, I thank you.

Linda- thank you, sweet lady of light

Kacy- yes, they do at times. it's good to see you here, too.

Dixie- thank you much

titch- perhaps...

it's good to have you here, my friend

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-12-01 12:32 PM

Damn...
Dunno what to say, Eddles.
Loved this a lot.

Miss ya.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2003-12-01 12:50 PM

I like this very much... beautiful write!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2004-01-20 03:59 PM

behind a wall
of indifference

I hate that wall... it is so hard sometimes to find a crack in it

Another nice one, Ed

M

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-01-20 04:02 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I can't even begin to believe why some believe a river should be dammed up, after all the river must find the ocean for the whole spiritual confluence of life to work! (sigh) Indifference is a kink in the way things work, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

poetically ghetto
Member

since 2004-01-20

Posts 100

11 posted 2004-01-20 04:10 PM

gritty little ditty
solid piece of work
thanx for sharing

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

12 posted 2004-01-20 05:04 PM

Outstanding write, thanks Edder!!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

13 posted 2004-01-20 10:15 PM

Edder -- I really liked this. I have one called Still Waters too. I have been trying to give you the address to it but it keeps posting additional messages below. Sorry about that.
Here we go finally, maybe: /pip/Forum83/HTML/001170.html

[This message has been edited by iliana (01-20-2004 10:47 PM).]

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2004-01-20 10:16 PM

technical problems here

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2004-01-20 10:17 PM

opps sorry hit this twice

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