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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2004-01-03 01:50 AM



take it...

take it all
and more
then fill your cup
to overflow
let not the
emptiness deceive -
beyond the surface,
river weeps

so come ye...

drink


in quench of thirst and
worry not of
nothing left
is in the
giving
I receive the
will to
'be'
another day and
pray, I do, that
ye may stay the
path that brings
ye back
one day
to
we


~Vicky L. Raynes


"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-03-2004 01:58 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-01-03 01:52 AM


Yes yes yes, I'll drink that cup. I'll drain every drop.

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-01-03 05:03 AM


feel-good write
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2004-01-03 06:16 AM


I knew this about you.




Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-01-03 06:26 AM


smilin here Vicky

M

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2004-01-03 07:34 AM


thinking alike today...

Happy New Year, Vicky
M

Sunshine
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6 posted 2004-01-03 07:42 AM



Let the New Year overflow that cup, m'friend.
I'm liking the way you're taking on
tomorrow.


Margherita
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7 posted 2004-01-03 08:18 AM


Just beautiful, dear Vicky. The cup of love is never empty, for those who share it freely.
Love, Margherita

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2004-01-03 09:15 AM


the water cycle
neverending and always bringing the return when its least expected,
very nice here

Martie
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9 posted 2004-01-03 12:03 PM


Wonderful and thoughtful write here, Vicky.  Hugs to you!
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10 posted 2004-01-04 10:30 AM


Very good writing, Vicky. I enjoyed.
Hugs and Happy New Year,
Ethel

Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2004-01-04 06:38 PM


I knew I would read something beautiful the moment I opened this thread.

Happy New Year Vicky,

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

dgvarner
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12 posted 2004-01-20 10:16 PM


"...let not the
emptiness deceive -
beyond the surface,
river weeps..."
==========================================
enjoyed this a lot...Can very much relate

lv,g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

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