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Half-Life ( for Wranx)
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Half-Life ( for Wranx) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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He has walked one mile and many tripping upon landmines hidden Landing sometimes exactly where he was meant to be and other times not and now Looking upon his journey muddled and bruised as I face torn and wrinkled from the same Sun He progresses He has come quite far, in a span of a thousand lifetimes lived within one half-life Calm cool stream sits for him taking pride acting as sentinal to the silent beatings in the deep dark night of a heart pure Rapids, white and wicked Dare him to a joust To test himself within them I think that he must be frightened Yet sure of his next step always the victor in this raging war He knows that I’ve just begun my journey Though it would seem I should be far along my path I stumble And look to him, not for an answer sometimes an answer always an answer Of what lies downstream and he walks with me Safe on the bank of his own stream and grabs my hand when I fall cleansing my wounds with his words If only to guide me far from the paths he knows well where he has fallen himself once or twice It is for this I am grateful If he had never fallen I would be falling still Thank you Ed . . . This is my response to your beautiful reply You can see the reply here: /pip/Forum79/HTML/001785.html [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-17-2003 12:06 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wow what a very nice write!!!!!!!  It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! lucky guy! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Little Birdie, this is a beautiful streaming and a such a loving reply to a wonderful poet. Lucky for you both to share that kind of friendship together. I really enjoyed the flow of feelings that you seemingly write so effortlessly. Hugs to you dear Tweety~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Absolutely beautiful sister Littlewing. What a wonderful reply from the golden heart of Ed. I had skipped over that one when I first read your other post. glad I didn't miss it this time. I love the way you say thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful and you realize that you two really have to do another duet..or three or four? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn Susie! (speechless) (HEY! it happens!...lol) I'll be back to this soon. (Yeah...as soon as I think of an adequate comment, that is.) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Calm cool stream " yes. smile That is the nature of the yeti.  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You've captured him beautifully...but yet can one really capture him? Most excellent write my dear.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This might sound a little, um, strange? but you are SO pretty? yer picture is quite distracting!  c'mere baby....  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
K you had to go say that and put that image in my head..can't stand up for awhile now lol |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, that was very thoughtful of you just as Wranx is a very special person, sweet friend, yay, you truly are a very special person and being the bearer of the light and the sparrow you are, may you keep singing away! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Sue? you have nailed my buddy he is a man who takes life by the reins on occasion and if it involves fun? he excels if it involves drudgery? he fails and who wouldnt want to be like that? good job Lady painting with words |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Q: thank you - thank Ed Dixie: hehehe . . . is that for me or Ed? lol TY Bluesy: you know - as we all do what a calming soul he is - yes a true friend indeed thank you Kacy: hahahah my thank you's can never be just a thank you now - can they? Yes - truly a golden heart . . . TY Raph: seems to me that we are doing these duets all the time lol (you own me one btw) thank you xxoo Ed - no need for a comment - you said enough on my post - I know you liked this (you better have liked this - I am so kidding . . . speechless . . . whoa! I am good) Well . . . look at what everyone said - seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee you never listen to me EVER . . . K: exactly - calm stream . . . Capture Ed Sharon? . . . no I dont believe it is possible - would be a crime really - but yes . . . thank you Karen - nothing from you sounds strange (OMG that scared me - did I write that?) Kiss back atchya missy . . . Raph: ahahahah we have that effect on men wear loose clothing . . . lmao - hehehehe Noah: goodness you always have such sweet words . . . yes he is special as we all are here . . . TY Bri? I tried to . . . didnt know I could paint . . . glad you liked . . . thank you and you know . . . this one just flew from my fingers . . . Thanks guys and thank you Ed xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-18-2003 04:54 AM).] |
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