Open Poetry #23 |
Your Touch Is Oh, So Tender |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
In the cold, cold night I feel you very near With your arms around me showing love so clear The warmth from your body lying next to mine You're holding me real close it certainly does feel fine Your arms are strong, yet gentle as you are holding me Making me feel safe where no harm will ever be Your touch is oh, so tender as you caress me, dear With your fingertips lightly touching everywhere You're whispering your love without uttering a word With touches speaking loudly and very plainly heard [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-15-2002 10:48 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
That is the most precious feeling in the world. knowing you are loved and respected without a single word being spoken. you're always able to put such beautiful things into words, whereas i have difficulty, so its so lovely when you often write what i'm feeling! u can read my mind!you're a special lady, with a special man to match. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You're whispering your love without uttering a word With touches speaking loudly and very plainly heard Lovely words Ethel,love this line especially and ironically I'm about to post a similar poem but not one quite as sweet. I guess the minds of us romantics are always linked [This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-15-2002 11:10 AM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, thank you so much. It means a lot to me to know that the kind of love that my Love and I share is also known by others. It's so very special that I can't seem to keep it all inside. Sometimes, I'm afraid that you sweet people here may get tired of reading my love poems, because I write them so often. It's really nice to know that they are enjoyed. Thank you so much for your sweet comments. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, thank you very much for your sweet reply. I really appreciate it. Yep, us romantics think a lot alike, don't we? I'm going right now to find your poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ethel sometimes the words are just not needed are they? This is just lovely! Hugs and peace to you. Thank you for sharing your lovely heart. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, no, sometimes words aren't needed........ Thank you, sweet lady , for your reply. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Ethel, this is sooooooooo beautiful, and I long for the day when I can finally hug Joanna and kiss her and also feel that special feeling of unconditional happiness! (kiss on cheek) I wish you and Gary the biggest smiles of love ever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton P.S: I wrote a very special poem for Joanna that I re-posted that is also a challenge I would be so happy if you tried! You can find the poem/challenge here, yay! /pip/Forum74/HTML/003515.html "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-15-2002 03:44 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, how wonderful for those women who do not have a 'significant other' in their lives, if your Gary could be cloned! hehe! ~ I'm happy for you, dear one! Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, I went to the poem and as I told you there, I'll TRY to meet your challenge, though I know I could never come near the way you write. But, if I wrote just like you, I wouldn't be me! HeeHee!! Seriously, thank you for your sweet comments. "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, that's true... HaHa!! He sure is everything in a man I've always wanted... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - nice touch, and tender... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Bill........ "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
So sweet! I think someday you will be rewarded plenty. Good and Plenty... good and plenty... Do you rem that? Thank you. etoodog [This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (12-16-2002 02:45 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you write of love so well, I could never even begin to imagine what that's like, not love like that... |
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