Open Poetry #23 |
Shakira (Poetry Challenge Inside!) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
/pip/Forum7/HTML/000537.html You can find the link to the poetry challenge above, revived from its original March running! It is to write a poem of any form or length either of the artist you and your love fell in love with together when you fell in love or to write a love poem and adding a specific song title or the artists name within the poem! Yay, good luck! Shakira is the artist me and Joanna have fallen in love with and whose lyrics inspire our love! She comes from Colombia and writes both beautiful love songs and intense political and rebellious unorthodox poetic lyrics! She is my favorite artist as she has a beautiful personality and a poetic soul that inspires both children and adults. Yay! I can't wait to read what artists inspire the rest of you and how their music makes you feel! Shakira (A Woman Of Grace) By: Noah Eaton 3/9/02 Underneath your clothes there's lies a legend Whenever, wherever, you amplify intense Latin passion A woman of grace, a woman of spirit God gave her a name, Shakira Everyone knows it just takes a little "Magia" to make your dreams come true Through rose-colored glasses, you see the world in a romantic view Just toss a coin into a washing machine You've got a Laundry Service of a Muse that gleams You soar from Colombia like a blue morpho butterfly With romantic songs that bring tears to my eyes I would walk a thousand miles just to give you a hug And see you with Joanna in concert to hear your music I love Underneath your clothes there's lies a legend Whenever, wherever, you amplify intense Latin passion A woman of grace, a woman of spirit God gave her a name, Shakira Shortly after you stepped into my life, my love We fell in love with her music together, crooning like lovesick doves Running with Pies Descalzos and resting on Suenos Blancos With her youth in heart, we will rock on every tomorrow Shake ‘em up, shake it down, shake your hips, let them sway Belly-dance, let your heart give all you have away “Love is lacking in our leaders and our leaders are lacking love!” So let the rebel in your heart come out and speak with true love Underneath your clothes there's lies a legend Whenever, wherever, you amplify intense Latin passion God calls you a woman of grace, a woman of spirit They gave you a name...Shakira Gabriel Garcia Marquez and the Pope grant you the best wishes Your presence always creates such a dervish Me and Joanna have fallen in love listening to you On our first date, your metronome will sing upon our romantic lagoon You wail that harmonica like John Popper, you vibe like Led Zeppelin You dance like a pro but recite poetry like Bob Dylan Every little thing you do is salsa and merengue Yet the youth in your lungs is always rocking everyday Underneath your clothes there's lies a legend Whenever, wherever, you amplify intense Latin passion God calls you a woman of grace, a woman of spirit They gave you a name...Shakira Underneath your clothes there's lies enchantment Your music is the one I want to hum while me and Joanna share loves first kiss God calls you a woman of grace, a woman of spirit They gave you a name...Shakira Shakira... Shakira… "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-11-2002 11:46 AM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
She looks just like the girls I used to sleep with!!!...(Two arms, two eyes, two arms, etc. etc. etc.)....good write knowwa! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you've met your own challenge quite well Noah... I enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have too many songs and artists that make me feel emotion, inspire writing, and touch my life. Too many to list but I will say this poem of yours is beautiful, along with the pictures too. You are such a deep thinker and a deep feeling man Noah. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was a great idea...and you did it well. I would struggle to pick one...may take a while in my attempt. ThisDiamond |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is fabulous, Noah. Enjoyed. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - this is a most beautiful write. You express your feelings very well... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Noah, I have no idea how I missed this one. I love it and I will try to meet your challenge, though Gary and I are inspired by a lot of songs and artists...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Wonderful write. You did this well! enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, Noah! I too, am a fan of her music! This was wonderful--and so entertaining! ~ I may attempt your challenge as well! Sending warm hugs to you, my friend! Linda |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good challenge met Noah.....You wrote this so very well! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Hey Noah! Que Pasa, amigo? Je vais cherchez l'amour, mon dieu, aussi! (from Sp to Fr, sorry!) Your poetic song had a feeling that it was 'calling', and i guess that is how the beckoning feels to you. You certainly made that emotion come to life, Noah! Be well, and love life, ami! Jeff |
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Dj_Scarebear Junior Member
since 2002-12-13
Posts 22Wooster,Oh |
Good Job! Good Stuff! Dj Scarebear What Is The Mind Without The Brain To THink For It. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay! Thank you all so much for your gorgeous comments, Shakira is the main inspiration behind much of my poetry as so many inspire me! And Ethel, you did so wonderfully on my challenge, I love your response, yay! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-18-2002 05:36 PM).] |
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