Another Part of the First Night Together or An Introduction to Tiny Moments

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Open Poetry #21

Another Part of the First Night Together or An Introduction to Tiny Moments

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

0 posted 2002-07-23 02:53 AM

Here is hoping for our book, my Love. This is me, the other half of us.
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Our moments could lend themselves for chapters in a book.
two pens dipped in passion
two hands joined in ink
two inks joined on the same pages
two hearts
one pen
dreaming and desiring in a wave of impossibility.
Below is but a brief few moments
but we offer it with the boast of hearts
surpassing the sound of thunder.

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Draped in satisfaction from lounging in a late night booth
we strolled smile in smile
through the kiss of an a.m. summer air.

a note for everyone and anyone interested in our story. We are indeed two hearts using one pen. Here are the links to our story in the best possible order I could get them. There is a she and a he, and right now this is the she of us. In later posts, you may or may not be able to tell if it is I or the he; but we hope you will enjoy either way. The above post would be the next one to all of these. Join us as our story continues?

The New Pages /pip/Forum70/HTML/001271.html

This Is Not The Beginning /pip/Forum70/HTML/000073.html

With A Simple Word /pip/Forum70/HTML/000023.html

Another Description of That First Moment(my version) /pip/Forum70/HTML/001430.html

Our First Night (his version) /pip/Forum70/HTML/000843.html

First Chance(my first version of it) /pip/Forum70/HTML/001029.html

Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

[This message has been edited by TwoHeartsOnePen (07-23-2002 12:49 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-07-23 12:09 PM

THOP,
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Draped in satisfaction from lounging in a late night booth
we strolled smile in smile
through the kiss of an a.m. summer air.
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I really like this. Nice touch.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-23 12:29 PM

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-07-23 07:03 PM

wonderful. . . the joining of two voices. . . it's a great idea. . .

looking forward to more. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-07-24 01:16 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the style of your work, sweet friend, I can't wait to watch this story unfold, this sounds so exciting and lovely, once I have the time I will read the other parts of the series, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-10-02 10:45 PM

I'm ready!

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