Another Description Of That First Moment

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Open Poetry #21

Another Description Of That First Moment

TwoHeartsOnePen
Member

since 2002-06-07

Posts 60
state of determination

0 posted 2002-07-04 01:29 AM

Beginning with eyes
meeting and shedding all doubt.
The shadows of a night arrested our bodies
as we fell to a new place in love.
Mundane demands to take care of
bags in car
seatbelt
felt like we were snuggling into our own private heaven session.
Watching the lights
the drivers
wondering at shyness
as our hands fell comfortable into each others
and eyes rested on all the parts
we had longed with our souls
to see standing before us.
The hardest decision
was whether to get food and settle into an all night restuarant
or surround ourselves
with the solitude of each other.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

[This message has been edited by TwoHeartsOnePen (07-04-2002 01:29 AM).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-07-04 04:58 AM

I'd take the solitude after the restaurant....Just kidding..
This wanders through your thoughts so nicely opening up poetic doors to view your feeling through images.
Nice writing!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-07-04 06:08 AM

Like it...James

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-07-04 05:20 PM

This sounds like reality...a lot of poems describing meeting, are just that - describing it - I feel like I'm there with you. (look under the seat for PdV!)

Sven