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Open Poetry #19

. . . surrender . . .

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-04-04 02:53 PM

I surrender dear
you own all I have to give
it was always yours

Inspired by:Body and Soul

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-04 02:56 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know she must feel so special reading these words knowing she means so much to you! (big hugggsssss) May you always surrender in loves true happiness together, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-04-04 02:59 PM

Yep! You done did good!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-04-04 03:11 PM

Lovely...so much you say, and what grand inspirations you have....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-04-04 03:51 PM

oooh i love this one!
makes me smile

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-04-04 03:55 PM

Yup! Like I keep sayin...you're the best!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2002-04-05 05:56 AM

Splendid!

Charisma

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-04-05 09:52 PM

Oh to hear someone say these beauiful words to me.
You say so much in such a short and simple format.
Sandra

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