Open Poetry #19 |
Body and Soul |
Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Moon's silver fire Chill Drawn around the night like a cloak Shrouding with colorless light Transforms reality to a photographic negative. White fire burns in your eyes As chill as the dark scape that is your domain Yet Kindles a fire in my blood Hot as the golden orb that rules my world of color and light Your gaze holds me as surly as if I were bound in chains My will becomes your will I am yours body and soul. Enotneicna SLR 1-28-02 Words are my medicine. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, and only a fool would turn away, my friend. Hope you passed this to him... jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the imagery you always put in your words, this is a true dreamscape of true loves beginning! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your body and soul froever sing with the songs of pure love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
jwesley, Yes I did pass this to him and his response was overwhelming........ many blessings Eno Noah, you are a sweetheart my friend......I have been very blessed with love's truest form. My Halfside stands beside me always with gentle pride and loving words, and I wish everyone could find what I have. many blessings Eno Words are my medicine. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh what a feeling you have expressed.... THIS, my friend is Love indeed!!! wonderful thoughts....!! beautiful writing! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Your gaze holds me surly as if I were bound in chains"....James |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is good. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enotneicna~ My friend ... this is BEAUTIFUL~ 'Your gaze holds me as surly as if I were bound in chains My will becomes your will I am yours body and soul.' I feel Spirits Walking all over your heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love this..nicely penned..hope to read more from you.. hugss ~Vic "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds like sweet surrender to me. ~*~ I surrender dear you own all I have to give it was always yours Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How wonderful to see inspiration, inspire... |
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