Open Poetry #19 |
Mermaid and Merman |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Mermaid and Merman -inspired by poetic words of Arlene Longson We are pronounced Mermaid and Merman! The skies, the stars and seas are there in sand For God ordained a joining by the sea God's choice mermaid has found a loving man And now they joy in purest ecstasy. Do you take this sweet mermaid for your wife To swim with her through storms and sunny skies? Dance all waves of happiness, storms and strife Forever in her love with perfect highs? I do. Do you accept this man to swim within Forever writing loving poetry The two of you together fin and fin In God and in each other by the sea? I do. Go forth in Love and Truth forevermore Find happiness beyond all pretty dreams And as you swim together by your shore In God you're sewed as One in Spirit seams, No earthly laws will haunt you as you be So love in freedom; defy gravity! We are pronounced Mermaid and Merman! Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida April 5, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What a truly wonderful thought, Mermaid and Merman, I would never have thought of that. Hahah this was terrific Newell. I suppose she wore a white gown and veil and He a tux, LOL, this was fun. floria Floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) OH MY GOSH, I LOVE MERMAIDS, THEY ARE MY FAVORITES, THIS IS WONDERFUL!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh my gosh, thank you, thank you for writing this, this is absolutely lovely, I am adding this to my library now to add to my mermaid collection! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy this is Utterly utterly fabulous writing darling heart, I love it. This is so beautiful, the words trickling over the page like water flows over the beach. Absolutely excellent writing, I am awed by this wonder. It is absolutely fabulous Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria. It was written for a dear poetess friend who lives on the sea and sometimes writes poetry with me. We are philosophically very close and share lots of spiritual ideas. Here, mermaid is a metaphor for God's Spirit in woman, loving God's Spirit in man. The marraige is Salvation. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-05-2002 03:06 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for your lavish praise. I knew that you would like a mermaid poem and I was thinking about you, too, when I penned it. Glad you like it. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you Marsha, darling girl. Your sweet words are always honey to my soul, sweet Queen of my garden. ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-05-2002 03:10 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love this Newell, I am a mermaid from Atlantis, I'm convinced Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
I believe that is true. I sense it when you write your comments. ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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