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Thank you, Flowergirl...
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Thank you, Flowergirl... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Thank you, Flowergirl…. Her weave of Nasturtium instantly seeded My recall Then my soul jumped back To that sunny day Standing in my father’s Shadow Holding the packet of orange-tiums… Waiting to throw The nastys Into the ground Daddy had that way of Splitting his finites into Infinity and packets of seed Into spits of color Perhaps because mother Didn’t care for nasty terraniums I cared for them more, as Dad bought the packet for me Then, not her And I grew special in his Discern as he chuckled over her Thundering…but today As I sit amid a real Thunderstorm… Pondering that Perhaps it was her way of Making that moment of Special delivery, wedging me Closer to my dad as only A mother can… By giving something for The vimen of this love Something to lean upon There in his shadow ~*~ Inspired by our own Flowergirl: /pip/Forum58/HTML/001661.html |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If Martie inspired this, then I thank her, also...such a touching memory-trip.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I truly believe that all our loved ones that support us offer us timeless gifts and qualities and those are like the bulbs we polant in the gardens of our hearts, which only bloom in time and bud delicate blossoms of blessings! (sigh) This is such a wonderful inspiring poem, sweet friend, you and Martie are two wonderful friends, we all love you both so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
as my father and I are two peas in a pod, my mom is still doing this I LOVE this and know it with my heart thanks for reminding me how I ended up such a Daddy's girl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Her weave of Nasturtium instantly seeded My recall ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Karilea, I did not have to go any further than this to know it was our Martie who inspired this. Today was a good day for writing afterall I see  What a wonderful memory was triggered here and beautifully penned as only you can. Enjoyed so much....hugs, Nancy. ~Sometimes all you really wish for... is someone to wish for you.~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (03-08-2002 11:06 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I have always called them nasty urchens..but, I love them for their tenacity, fragrance and just sweet memory. I see I'm not the only one. I'm so glad to have brought this lovely poem from you...far better then mine! Hugs! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
"Thanks for the memories" Lovely writing Karilea. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
EXCELLENT POEM!!!! This poem wowed me!!!! The way you weave the flowers into your memories of your father is pure magic. ***Ivy Rose |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
this is ART, as is our precious, Martie. Thank you for this just me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kiri darling sister of heart and keeper of dreams truth, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION I love this trip down memory lane darling heart, as always utterly utterly beautiful. YOU and Marti are definitely artists. Excellent writing here really excellent    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Beautifully done sunshine, so happy you were inspired to do this lovely work of art. floria Floria |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This blooms with beauty |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the way you say this, Karilea... Standing in my father’s Shadow Holding the packet of orange-tiums… Waiting to throw The nastys Into the ground and I would like to thank Martie for inspiring you. Its just just gorgeous and says so very much.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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