Open Poetry #19 |
Thy Lips Will Whisper.... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I cast thee not away from me my heart wilt surely fail I live for you a knight to be in search of holy grail In thine own heart and soul I find my yearn within thy breast For with true love I wilt recline as thee art truly best Wilt thee not know tis mine you take into the wane of light To dine and sup fruits of wine to slake and share one sure delight Thy charm and touch do bring to heart a beat to fuel this fire Wilt thee not shirk from warmth of arm for thee most strong desire Upon the bed of soft and white thy charms I will explore till ‘pon the strike of dawn is right thy lips doth whisper ....more! [This message has been edited by Magnus (03-09-2002 09:43 AM).] |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow these words are wonderful Magnus. "To dine and sup fruits of wine to slake and share one sure delight' and I just love the last verse, very romantic for your "lady" wonderful. floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Upon the bed of soft and white thy charms I will explore till ‘pon the strike of dawn is right thy lips doth whisper ....more! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ YES!! Ah Barry, this wench is loving every one of these! Wonderful, and they must be most diffult to do. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy I utterly utterly love this one, an absolutely excellent poem from you. I’ve said before I don’t know how you keep excelling yourself time after time. This is absolutely top notch writing. Wonderful really really wonderful writing Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This one said it all... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Floria, thank you...yes, I like the last verse too....is my favorite... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Awwww Nancy, you are such a hopeless romantic wench, art thee not?? Glad you enjoyed....thank you!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, Mushy, quite so smushy... so utterly so... Written words from only our Mushy, the feelings that do flow.... Thanx Mushy... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ The all is said for is thee lore I rest my head and give thee more. Thanx Karilea... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! I agree, these must be so difficult to write, but you always write them so wonderfully and share the most loveliest visions of your heart! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
"thy lips doth whisper ....more!" and they do..... I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, my fellow romantice friend...thank you...glad you enjoyed... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dee... Into the late of night a poet pens words in light as softly whipered is the choice of yet another lovely voice... YES...more.... Thank You.... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You really do have a way with those romantic poems, Barry. Thy charm and touch do bring to heart a beat to fuel this fire this one is absolutely beautiful! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lyra....(modesty overcoming me)....I do try...and I do enjoy writing this, it is very challenging to me... Thine eyes do absorb the write of pen upon touch of line As thee know I leave to fight as leaves do fall from vine. For in the winter's bleak night my steed does wait to ride And as I leave thee in the light my tears in struggle hide. Thank You Lyra....I enjoy your comments... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well versed...James |
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Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Very impressive writing. Your words of beauty are expressed so well. I appreciate the sharing of great poetry. Write from the soul and the words will flow |
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