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Elias III
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Elias III |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Elias, son, I fear I'm lost, No path to lead the way, I see not the midnight moon, I see but light of day. Elias will you take my hand, To guide me through the night, Through the shadows of the dark, To glow of welkin's light? Will you take your hand in mine, As into darkness wend, Guide me through the dark of night, To path of journey's end? Out amid the feral creatures, Beside deep flowing stream, Elias will you lead the way, Unto the land of dream? /pip/Forum53/HTML/001364.html /pip/Forum53/HTML/001432.html [This message has been edited by Tim (02-10-2002 12:06 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim, Nice write enjoyed the read. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Tim, Nicely done.I enjoyed this very much. peaches |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim--I always enjoy the twists and turns that you take in your poetry writing. This series is very well done! I enjoyed the read. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoy the adventures that Elias takes or rather we take with Elias  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Such a powerfully bittersweet narration, sweet friend, I just love the way you express yourself and can't wait to see how the journey continues! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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