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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-25 08:32 PM




Missing Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

Evening spent
searching throughout
welkin sky beauty seeking
radiance of soft moonbeams
Weeping openly in discovering
the indigo abyss as darkened
as the crescent of my heart
When did the glow waltz
away and will it ever
return to me



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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1 posted 2001-06-25 08:39 PM



Oh my! Marge, this is way too awesome  

Take care,
Melissa~

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2 posted 2001-06-25 08:41 PM


Marge, my luna loving friend,
   nobody writes the moon
   better than you do...
   loving this!  

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-06-25 08:41 PM


wow this is so impressively cleverly yuh
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4 posted 2001-06-25 08:51 PM


Well done, my moonstruck maiden!  Always a delight for the eyes
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5 posted 2001-06-25 08:51 PM


Absolutely beautiful Marge...........Sue

Suetang

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6 posted 2001-06-25 10:26 PM


Sigh, Marge, how did one of the Children of the Sun become a moon maiden, such as this..of course I am teasing, nice read as always...gentle smile
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7 posted 2001-06-25 10:52 PM


Melissa~
That crescent moon just keeps whispering my name~

Vicky~
Bet you can tell that I love it, huh ?

Walt~
I'm glad you caught the glow.

Karilea~
Just a little paintbrush with poetry episode.

SueTang~
I do thank you.

Logan~
Ah, my friend ...
Sun needs Moon to light the way ~
Moon needs Sun to follow ~
Together they waltz ~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-06-26 12:13 PM


Marge:  A really lovely poem and your format is so effective!

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2001-06-26 02:31 AM


A class act to follow, so I will skip the poem and simply say luminous, lustrous, brilliant, bright, glowing, splendent, lunar lettering, by golly gee!  Real perty!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

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10 posted 2001-06-26 04:42 AM


BettyLou~
Thank you ... I had a great time painting this one.

Mysteria~
Sometimes I wonder what I'd do if I didn't have my paints with me !
Gosh ... at least it slows me down ...
or I'd be posting way past the limits of common courtesy here !  
LOVE YOU ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-06-26 06:03 AM


Marge
I saw some of the moon there but I understand what you mean. Love these lines....

                           "the indigo abyss as darkened
                              as the crescent of my heart
                                When did the glow waltz
                                  away and will it ever
                                      return to me"

Beautiful work Marge!

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12 posted 2001-06-26 07:10 AM


I love the way your paintbrush beams... This one is great...
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13 posted 2001-06-26 09:02 AM


"when did the glow waltz
away and will it ever
return to me"

Oh Marge ... the glow is never far away from you my friend. Beautiful sentiments and presentation, you constantly amaze me with your incredible creativity. Lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-26-2001).]

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14 posted 2001-06-26 10:29 AM


enjoy
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2001-06-27 12:54 PM


ETHome~
Glad you caught her glow !

Nanners~
Thank you, lady.
I had such fun painting this phase.

Kit~

Moon in
adorning rays
sends her amaze
Dancing across
my heart


VanDana~
Back to ya' love.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Sudhir Iyer
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16 posted 2001-06-29 10:59 AM



the soft
and beautiful
essence of the moon
is always present to delight
our little hearts, throwing smiles
& showering happy rays of lights,
look within and you'll find beams
of silent sublime, radiating upon
when angels of the night dance
lightly, tiptoeing their way
into our worried souls
as if to ease our
minds



Oh, this is fantastically done, my friend,
My regards to you Marge,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2001-06-29 11:19 AM


Oh, Sudhir~
I am so pleased to see you on this one ...
It was almost a year ago that you did a crescent moon for me .... in reply to one of my 'Moonies' ...
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and my intend was to do one that I could get to 'take' in posting.
I tried one that I'd done some time ago ...
and never could get it to post ....
Soooo, I thought of you immediately when this one came to me.

It pleases me muchy that you enjoyed this.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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