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Missing Moon
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Missing Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Missing Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ Evening spent searching throughout welkin sky beauty seeking radiance of soft moonbeams Weeping openly in discovering the indigo abyss as darkened as the crescent of my heart When did the glow waltz away and will it ever return to me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh my! Marge, this is way too awesome  Take care, Melissa~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, my luna loving friend, nobody writes the moon better than you do... loving this! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow this is so impressively cleverly yuh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done, my moonstruck maiden! Always a delight for the eyes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful Marge...........Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sigh, Marge, how did one of the Children of the Sun become a moon maiden, such as this..of course I am teasing, nice read as always...gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ That crescent moon just keeps whispering my name~ Vicky~ Bet you can tell that I love it, huh ? Walt~ I'm glad you caught the glow. Karilea~ Just a little paintbrush with poetry episode. SueTang~ I do thank you. Logan~ Ah, my friend ... Sun needs Moon to light the way ~ Moon needs Sun to follow ~ Together they waltz ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: A really lovely poem and your format is so effective! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A class act to follow, so I will skip the poem and simply say luminous, lustrous, brilliant, bright, glowing, splendent, lunar lettering, by golly gee! Real perty! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ Thank you ... I had a great time painting this one.  Mysteria~ Sometimes I wonder what I'd do if I didn't have my paints with me ! Gosh ... at least it slows me down ... or I'd be posting way past the limits of common courtesy here !  LOVE YOU ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge I saw some of the moon there but I understand what you mean. Love these lines.... "the indigo abyss as darkened as the crescent of my heart When did the glow waltz away and will it ever return to me" Beautiful work Marge! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I love the way your paintbrush beams... This one is great...  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"when did the glow waltz away and will it ever return to me" Oh Marge ... the glow is never far away from you my friend. Beautiful sentiments and presentation, you constantly amaze me with your incredible creativity. Lovely! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-26-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Glad you caught her glow ! Nanners~ Thank you, lady. I had such fun painting this phase. Moon in adorning rays sends her amaze Dancing across my heart VanDana~ Back to ya' love.~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the soft and beautiful essence of the moon is always present to delight our little hearts, throwing smiles & showering happy rays of lights, look within and you'll find beams of silent sublime, radiating upon when angels of the night dance lightly, tiptoeing their way into our worried souls as if to ease our minds Oh, this is fantastically done, my friend, My regards to you Marge, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Sudhir~ I am so pleased to see you on this one ... It was almost a year ago that you did a crescent moon for me .... in reply to one of my 'Moonies' ... /pip/Forum37/HTML/001887.html and my intend was to do one that I could get to 'take' in posting. I tried one that I'd done some time ago ... and never could get it to post .... Soooo, I thought of you immediately when this one came to me. It pleases me muchy that you enjoyed this. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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