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Moon Glow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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~*~ Moon glow of such great delight waltz me across the sky this night Ever in your glow contain me Lend your light to gently reign me In the aura of your beams Light within my waiting dreams Moon of wonder and delight Shine on me ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Marge..... You do such wonderful things!!!! Your words are so smooth....they flow perfectly, and I just have to say that I'm in awe of how you do the layouts!! I've got a lot to learn here!!! Thank you for your artistry, both verse and graphic! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...you've got me singing, 'this little light of mine'. How lovely a poem you've made. I'm smiling. Be well. *Peace. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ ~*Sunny1*~ likes the moon that glows way up in the sky She likes the glowing rays as it waltzes right on by Please, Oh Sunny 1, why does it please you so ? Tell me why does it set you aglow ~*~ ~*~ SpitFire This little light of delight I'm gonna let it shine Just to send a glow to a friend of mine This little light of mine Sent to spread a smile For just little while I'm gonna let it shine Let it shine just for you ~*~ *Thank you both for your delightful replies ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ You have captured the esssnce of the moon in your words. This was beautiful my friend. I must say, I love the moon!!!!!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I can't think of anyone else I would rather be mooned by!  This is beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ Lone Wolf howling at the moon Shining with delight Filling me with words of praise She thinks I did it right I am full of joy at this compliment from your pen Thank you always for replying to me my friend ~*~ ~*~ LOL at Balladeer Thinks that he's been 'mooned' I've just started glowing so don't go away too darned soon Love you ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Geez Marge, is there a style you don't master? You are an inspiration for diversity; the more I read, the more I write. Still basking in the moonlight... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ Oh Trew I'm glad that you enjoy the things I do Pleasing readers pleases me Makes me write better poetry Thank you for the sweet reply I will keep on writing if you promise you will keep on reading and smiling Thanks again ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and another faithful fan smiles, mooned by beautiful poetry |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your talents glow brightly, Marge! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
My smile is glowing as brightly as this little piece of yours Marge...a most delightful read thanksTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ Kaile A little moon glow to light the night Seems to be in everyone's sight Grinning at the reply of you ~*~ ~*~ Denise It just seems to be so very true The moon is glowing on friends so new Brightly shining on old ones too Just like me and you Shine on Moon Glow ~*~ ~*~ Tracie Thank you for kindly sharing the glow that the moon is wearing Friends within her beams do shine Bright in this full heart of mine Moon Glow ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge I don't know how you do it but I'm glad you do. Everytime I read some of your work it gives me a shot in the heart and mind. I get a great lift out of your energetic poetic attitude. Man those are great moon shaped poems...only you Marge. Take care. WRITE ON FAIR DAMSEL!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ ETHome Shot in the heart by a 'luna' lover Only then did he discover the Moon Glow was his undoing ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Well you done it again. I must admit, I do think this one was kind of fun, huh. Very nice twist with the shape and color. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ LadyWeb What a delight to find you in the Moon Glow of the night Glowing in the light ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, you are so wonderful with moons... wow what a wonderful work... as always... ... so inspiring.... here is my crescented moon.... trying to share the spotlight Celestially slivered moon in her crescent form called out my name. Upon hearing my name announced in whispers, I glanced into the nights' Clouded darkness, and Through the clouds, I Saw the most luminous Divine halo. She shone Bright, shadows aglow by reflected light from the sun. Her eye winked most invitingly and smiling. I blinked [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is absolutely asoundingly amazing. Perceptive people will see I LOVE IT. Those not so perceptive will just think I like it.  You are a star among the darkness. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ Sudhir I'm so pleased to have inspired you to hang crescent moon Your thoughts are so glowing with pride a great effort GLOW ~*~ ~*~ Marsha Awwwwwwwww! I'm so glad that you LOVE it and your perception shines with a Glow ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
MT,you've mooned everyone with your lovely poem. Well done! Gossamerwings ;) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Do you know that this was simply devine??? I loved your theme in this Marge (not to mention how you've carried it through so brilliantly in all the replies). Beautifuly shimmering verse! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ GossamerWings Thanks so much for your sweet reply and welcome to the family of friends where all things shine so brightly ~*~ ~*~ Kit Oh, what a nice sweet thing you do when you reply as you do Setting a'glow the heart of a poet is such a reflection of who you are - and in the eyes of this observer - you glow as brightly as the Moon does ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
A tiny share for Sudhir~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you muchly.... my dear friend... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, this is lovely Hugs2uSweetie *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~  CoCoBaci~ Goodness .... hard to believe this was written a year ago ! Leave it you, sweet archiver ! Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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