Open Poetry #39 |
this passion |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
when first my feet touch beach sand gritty between bare toes and amber eyes meet amber eyes it is your face I will touch the hollow between nose and mouth the place you were angel kissed at birth I will wait for arms to hold me fit top of head under your chin ear to chest listen for your blood no kiss this passion is too deep for kiss this passion longs for hold |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, this soft side of your fragile is shimmering with glow...enjoyed you this way |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, how beautiful a theme close to my heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
softly beautiful, Kate. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Softly, softly blows the wind. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Oh, just this, indeed. Keep penning favorites, Lady... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Gentle hugs... perfect preamble I think I'm inspired Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
"the hollow between nose and mouth the place you were angel kissed at birth" Well done my lady! Omnia vincit amor |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin’ this soft side of my fragile thinks about love a lot… thank you so much Dixie thank you gentle Donna awww Sir Sy I love the kiss thank you Decaflame thank you kindly thank you for the hugs Interloper Pressie thank you so much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my this is SO beautiful! Sing in me muse... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very beautiful write RDB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"for arms to hold me fit top of head under your chin ear to chest listen for your blood" Such passion would make the blood rush, the heart beat so fast as to surely melt, and the souls to warm exquisitely and blissfully to meld one to the other. An infinately beautiful write, Milady that captivates, enchants and leaves one wanting for more of the same... 'this passion'. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this passion is deep Sir Moonshadow how deep I know not yet thank you |
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