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this love |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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Even After All this time. The Sun Never Says to the earth, "You owe Me." Look What Happens With a love like that, It lights the Whole Sky.” ~Hafez he speaks to me in farsi words not of my ken no matter this love does not depend upon stars dancing words I understand smoke and mirrors trick ponies roses from the corner store this love is from before words before winds blew ships aground before snow covered ends of the world before old men sat muttering in corners and young girls tripped about with covered faces kohl lined eyes this love stands alone a third entity complete this love is |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, your love story is punishable by a life sentence (syllable at least) enjoyed your soft shoe here |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' I can deal with a life sentence and still dance thank you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
May I have the next dance, Kate  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
love looks so lovely on you dear. Hugs to you, what a delicously beautiful write! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
W o n d e r f u l! Indeed LOVE IS and you conveyed this message so beautifully! Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Interloper I thought you would never ask no music necessary thank you gentle Donna I just can’t seem to stop writing about it any ideas? thank you for your delightful reply Margherita |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This is fantastic, you use words full of grace and honour, truth and sage wisdom, there is Maya Angelou words here, a gentle righteousness that is befitting of a Lady..thank you .. Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (11-29-2006 02:51 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this love stands alone a third entity complete this love is to let all that we know fall away, into a mist, adopting an adolescent trust, to allow, and be.... terrific write |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Goldenrose did you really say Maya Angelou? what a lovely thing to say thank you exactly LeeJ and it’s so perfect isn’t it? thank you |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Enchanting, Milady... this love is what dreams are made of. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and dreams... are what love is made of Sir Moonshadow... thank you |
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