The Valentine’s Day Challenge

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Open Poetry #34

The Valentine’s Day Challenge

Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2005-02-09 07:10 PM

The Valentine’s Day Challenge

Love’s an emotion I’ll not understand;
Red velvet roses held firm in the hand.
Hearts pound devotion. No use to say.
Body’s in motion to start a Great Day.
Flames in my eyes, a smile on her lips,
Hot in our Passions, my does time slip!
Pink satin teddy. I think I’ll stay home,
Dream that I may, but still it’s a poem.

Happy Valentine’s Day!
(LOL) How did I do?

Lighthouse Bob

Sunshine

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1 posted 2005-02-09 07:22 PM

I think you won while losing?
The challenge, that is.

As for a Valentine's Day poem,
I think that you did just fine!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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2 posted 2005-02-09 07:56 PM

Fun - love the humor

Susan

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iliana
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3 posted 2005-02-09 08:20 PM

LOL...this is cute! Bravo for you, Bob! ......jo

Greeneyes

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4 posted 2005-02-10 08:20 AM

LOL its wonderful BOB .... a sweet expression for valentines....

~~*~~
the wind sings with the calm
tranquilize in the night
sien beauty on my lips
~~**~~

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2005-02-10 10:09 AM

cute

Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2005-02-11 01:01 PM

Thanks Gals. I'm glad I did ok on this one. At first I thought I might have used one of those (hmmmmmm) forsakened words, but I guess not. (Smiles) Thanks for the challenge. I enjoyed it. Happy Valentines Day. -Bob

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