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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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From time to time I’m reminded of then when there were no goodbyes between us From time to time the song of you sings through my soul dancing me tenderly home From time to time I feel you wrap around my heart and soothe this ache of missing you From time to time I wish that you knew all along it was always....you ~SEA~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely thoughts and ponderings...I wish he knew this about you to, cuz he's missing a gold mine.... beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA A lovely write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and this touched a part of me too for I know how you feel  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
from time to time I wish you knew all along it was you hot topic ms seasue.. he is blessed hope you have told him by now |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Susan...beautiful thoughts of someone special. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I know this one all too well. JL  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
*hugs* you know what i'm thinking... "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Had these thoughts a few times myself...James |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
"this ache of missing you." How well you capture that feeling. Corinne |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
*grin* my favorite country song! but i still gotta smile whenever you write (and don't rhyme)  egowhores.com - really love yourself. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
felt the heart in this - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
love kissed touch to this SEA. Nicely done lady. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Remember how many times you told me that I wrote what your heart was thinking ? You've done it to me now~  I've wrapped myself in the melancholy of this piece ... gonna keep this one close, very close to my heart~ *Huglets*  and thank you~~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, I think that in my heart there is a spot only you can touch. For always your writing moves me. Thanks for that.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, this poem has a way of reaching out and touching anyone who has ever lost a love. Beautiful. ......jo |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sea~ you know I love this.....I always "sigh" when reading you knowing how touching your words are.....hugsssss Lady..... ~~*~~ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Beautiful write, Sea, and so loving. I enjoyed this so much. Sauni Sauni:) I shall allow no man to belittle my soul by making |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
By the way, awesome title! Sauni:) I shall allow no man to belittle my soul by making |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"From time to time the song of you sings through my soul dancing me tenderly home" quite rightly romantic... Thanks, Billy 8) "If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it." |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
SEA, I love your devotion expressed here. -Bob |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SEA, you have a way of reaching out and pulling the reader into your world ~ or remind them of things in their own... It's good to read you again. SEA without the S  |
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