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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2005-02-07 10:23 AM




From time to time
I’m reminded
of then
when there were no goodbyes
between us

From time to time
the song of you
sings through my soul
dancing me tenderly
home

From time to time
I feel you
wrap around my heart
and soothe this ache
of missing you

From time to time
I wish that you knew
all along it was
always....you


~SEA~

© Copyright 2005 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-02-07 10:27 AM


lovely thoughts and ponderings...I wish he knew this about you to, cuz he's missing a gold mine....

beautiful

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-02-07 10:29 AM


SEA
A lovely write.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-02-07 10:31 AM


and this touched a part of me too
for I know how you feel


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-07 11:07 AM


from time to time
I wish you knew
all along
it was you


hot topic ms seasue..
he is blessed
hope you have told him
by now

Enchantress
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5 posted 2005-02-07 01:30 PM


Lovely Susan...beautiful thoughts of someone special.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

JL
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6 posted 2005-02-07 02:29 PM


I know this one all too well.
JL


ESP
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7 posted 2005-02-07 04:38 PM


*hugs* you know what i'm thinking...

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-02-07 06:58 PM


Had these thoughts a few times myself...James
Corinne
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state of confusion
9 posted 2005-02-07 07:42 PM


"this ache of missing you."

How well you capture that feeling.


Corinne

Christopher
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10 posted 2005-02-07 08:31 PM


*grin*

my favorite country song!

but i still gotta smile whenever you write (and don't rhyme)

egowhores.com - really love yourself.

Susan
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11 posted 2005-02-07 10:43 PM


felt the heart in this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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12 posted 2005-02-08 07:21 AM


love kissed touch to this SEA.  Nicely done lady.
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13 posted 2005-02-08 04:51 PM


SEA~

Remember how many times you told me that I wrote what your heart was thinking ?

You've done it to me now~

I've wrapped myself in the melancholy of this piece ... gonna keep this one close, very close to my heart~
*Huglets* and thank you~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Larry C
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14 posted 2005-02-08 08:17 PM


Susan,
I think that in my heart there is a spot only you can touch. For always your writing moves me. Thanks for that.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

iliana
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15 posted 2005-02-09 12:21 PM


SEA, this poem has a way of reaching out and touching anyone who has ever lost a love.  Beautiful.   ......jo
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16 posted 2005-02-09 12:26 PM


Sea~

you know I love this.....I always "sigh" when reading you knowing how touching your words are.....hugsssss Lady.....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Saunni
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17 posted 2005-02-09 05:08 AM


Beautiful write, Sea, and so loving. I enjoyed this so much. Sauni

Sauni:) I shall allow no man to belittle my soul by making
me hate him.
Booker T. Washington

Saunni
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18 posted 2005-02-09 05:09 AM


By the way, awesome title!

Sauni:) I shall allow no man to belittle my soul by making
me hate him.
Booker T. Washington

coyote
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19 posted 2005-02-10 10:31 PM


"From time to time
the song of you
sings through my soul
dancing me tenderly
home"

quite rightly romantic...

Thanks,
Billy 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

Lighthousebob
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20 posted 2005-02-11 01:05 PM


SEA,

I love your devotion expressed here. -Bob

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2005-02-11 01:14 PM


SEA, you have a way of reaching out and pulling the reader into your world ~ or remind them of things in their own...

It's good to read you again.


SEA without the S

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