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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2005-01-24 03:54 PM

Heartache Seeps Seriatim
~*Marge Tindal*~

One by one
two by two
breaking
pieces
fragmented
litter the night
Count the memories
Count the numerous tears
never quite enough of the first
and, so far, too many of the last
Twisted rend of love unattended
carelessly strewn o'er the path
No other aching compares
to the fragility left
lying there~

Word of the Day for Monday January 24, 2005

seriatim \sir-ee-AY-tim; -AT-im\, adverb:
In a series; one after another.

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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suthern

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1 posted 2005-01-24 04:05 PM

Oh... how true... Never enough of the first... and the second just won't stop.

Beautiful work, my friend!!

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2005-01-24 04:11 PM

Beautifully done, Marge.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2005-01-24 04:24 PM

understanding this...
"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Susan
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walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-01-24 04:47 PM

written so lovely in its ache - beautiful dear Marge -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Margherita
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Eternity

5 posted 2005-01-24 05:19 PM

Poignant write, dear Marge!

Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-01-24 05:23 PM

love the new picture, Marge...and of course your words~~
hugs
M

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2005-01-24 06:18 PM

I just re-opened the Dream Duets thread over in Challenge......After this beauty, I think I'm gonna link you with Lucky!

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______________Ratleader______________

Trillium

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8 posted 2005-01-24 06:40 PM

Dear Marge:

Profoundly moving and beautifully penned!
Your new picture is beautiful!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

MGROVES

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9 posted 2005-01-24 06:50 PM

beautifull words

help ones understanding

iliana
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10 posted 2005-01-27 08:58 PM

An amazing write, Marge. Also, I really liked the laid this out.

....jo

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

11 posted 2005-01-28 01:22 AM

I have seen enough tears lately....

feeling your words~
~ARh

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Enotneicna
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12 posted 2005-01-28 01:35 AM

ahh yes too many of the latter but they do fade eventually. your words touch heart and soul.

much love always,
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno

MGROVES

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13 posted 2005-01-28 03:56 AM

back to the top~ wanted to read again
thanks

LeeJ
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14 posted 2005-01-28 07:50 AM

how fragile life can be...how simply one second can change the lives of many
Hugs Margie...

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2005-01-28 11:35 AM

No other aching compares
to the fragility left
lying there~

Exactly how it is Marge...
this is a lovely love rendering.

Martie

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16 posted 2005-01-28 12:00 PM

Marge/sis

I echo all the others...and add

passing shadows
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displaced

17 posted 2005-01-28 12:37 PM

you always touch me

Lighthousebob
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18 posted 2005-01-28 05:36 PM

Now, let this pot that you've drawn with your seriatim words be completely full and overflowing, my po(e)tess friend, with wonderful wonderful memories that you need not be sad any longer. (Smiles) Thank you for sharing the new word and for sharing your wonderful talent. -Bob

JamesMichael
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19 posted 2005-01-28 06:42 PM

Very nice Marge...James

Betty
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20 posted 2005-02-01 02:04 PM

Beautiful

hoot_owl_rn
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21 posted 2005-02-01 04:56 PM

..ahhh, but tears do dry and sorrow is never forever

INclan
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22 posted 2005-02-02 05:07 PM

INsightfull...

*Alli4000*

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23 posted 2005-02-02 06:39 PM

Beautiful write!

~Alli~

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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

24 posted 2005-03-21 08:15 PM

Oh my ... forgive me for leaving these splendid comments unthanked~

Thank you all, I do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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