Open Poetry #34 |
JOURNEY to My Heart (for You) |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
It is late at night, and I wait here, with open arms, Being forever yours, faithfully, I turn out the light, In hopes that you'll send your love, along the wire, Even though we are, world's apart, we can make it through loves fire, anyway you want it, I can give it, Love'in, touch'in, squeeze'in, so Don't stop belive'in, Look to the wheel in the sky, Me, you will be see'in, We both know that only the young survive, Don't stop believe'in, give our love another try, This Girl can't help it, that shes, totally in love with you, who's crying now?, ask the lonely, they will tell you, but I have you, So when you listen to Journey, follow the music, it will lead you to the center of my heart, Your journey awaits... now is the time to start. Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good and very clever, i really like this poem...it has that certain ellement ...mmm..i wonder what it could be? Thank you... love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very song-like |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
WOW! My soul is stirred, for sure. You make it all sound so easy, and you are as your username implies: a Romantic Heart. Great write. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Oh, this was awesome! Journey was my absolute FAVORITE when I was a teen...many years ago... |
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