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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2005-02-10 02:37 PM

so i wait here

washing my footsteps
of non-history
tiny ones

and then
drying
on the wintry
clothesline

skeletal
down to the bone
of my still existing
love

i miss you so much

so much
the summer-shine of my
passion

you
the absent word
of my unfinished line
that refuses
to open out
from my cardboard box
that some call
heart

my valentine
of pine
you remain

as
i spill tears
in Warhol colours
of black and white

drip
and then
splash

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2005-02-10 02:39 PM

Oh Sudhi, this is...sighhh, just beautiful.
I've missed you m'friend.

Maree

p.s one for the library.

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2005-02-10 02:40 PM

Maree,

thanks so much... the feeling is (I'm sure) mutual

regards
sudhir

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-02-10 02:49 PM

Sudhir, it's about time you showed your handsome face and shared your poetic talents with us!!!

Sending you a Valentine's Day hug,
Linda

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2005-02-10 02:52 PM

Linda,

Thank you so much

regards
sudhir

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-02-10 03:00 PM

warhol colors, drip and splash

Sigh...I've missed reading you
how beautifully romantic!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2005-02-10 03:02 PM

too kind, you are

thank you,
sudhir

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2005-02-10 03:11 PM

Suddie...it is so good to welcome you home again...
stay awhile this time, please...
we've been wondering where our poets had
wandered off to...

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2005-02-10 03:27 PM

wandering, I am, my friend...
but never away

thanks so much,
sudhir

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-02-10 03:37 PM

Good to see you here again. Enjoyed this write very much.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2005-02-10 04:08 PM

Don't you dare stay away so long again Sudhir. It is people that write poetry so well like you that can even make us poor souls who try read if you keep writing here. Sending a hug to you over there m'friend, and its beautiful poetry you give us.

The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious.
It is the source of all art and science.
Albert Einstein

~ Carpe' Diem ~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2005-02-10 04:21 PM

Sudhir! So good to read you once again.
And this one is a real 'sigh maker'.
Hugs to you m'friend.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

12 posted 2005-02-10 04:21 PM

i wouldn't dare

thank you so much,
sudhir

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2005-02-10 05:07 PM

such emotion
splatters the canvas
here

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2005-02-10 05:34 PM

"you
the absent word
of my unfinished line"

Sudhir, I wished I'd come up with that line! Lovely heart pour here.

....jo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2005-02-10 06:25 PM

Nice...James

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

16 posted 2005-02-11 04:59 AM

Thanks a bunch Michelle, Jo and James.

Regards
Sudhir

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

17 posted 2005-02-11 05:12 AM

Hi S

only popped in a few minutes, found your poem, couldn't resist reading it. And it is nice to read your writing again.

And I like it - full of your usual poignancy.

(but I do think you could afford to lose the last three lines, you're belabouring your point heh).

Hugs

K

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

18 posted 2005-02-11 09:10 AM

This is exactly how I have been feeling. Just beautiful Sudhir.

You have been missed.

I like the new beat style jazzy thang ya got goin' on here.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

19 posted 2005-02-15 07:25 AM

Thanks a lot Kamla and Sue...

Kamla,
I re-thought your thoughts and reworded the last two stanzas:
---
as i drip
and then splash
in Warhol colours
of black and white

--- spilling tears sounded too plain on the re-read

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

20 posted 2005-02-16 11:28 AM

I can barely keep up when I'm online every day... playing catch up is hard... But oh... is it worth it... for if I'd missed this, I would have missed a treasure. *S* Beautiful write!!!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

21 posted 2005-02-17 12:54 PM

Thank you so much, my friend...

Regards
sudhir

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

22 posted 2005-02-18 03:08 PM

Hello my smilin' friend !!
I am popping this treasure into my library!
Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

23 posted 2005-02-22 06:58 AM

Thanks Chris

regards
sudhir

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

24 posted 2005-03-27 09:31 AM

found it again...just to let you know I have.

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