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Open Poetry #34

Tristan

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-01-20 08:03 AM

Priest
you waste your time

Not all your prayers and medicines
will do him any good

I have tried
knowing this day might come
to cure him for decades more than you

Flowers have withered
the leaves have fallen
in the garden that was his heart

Let us go
as he wishes so

Goodbye
Farewell to the world I knew

Take care my friend
The night is cold

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-20 08:14 AM

Flowers have withered
the leaves have fallen
in the garden that was his heart

am in a touching mode this morning...
Your words agree with me

M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-20 08:19 AM

TRISTAN and ISOLT?

beautifully written

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-04-28 02:21 AM

sad.

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