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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-01-02 02:51 AM

Look a moment
over there.
Winter is on the fallow field.

Gray sky.
A line of elms.
Snow upon the hills.

See, though still,
how beautiful
the weathered barn beside the road,

the silver surfaced
frozen pond,

apart from what is said.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-01-02 05:17 AM

I see it

and it's beautiful

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2005-01-02 04:30 PM

I like this...lovely write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2005-01-02 06:26 PM

I live it~~

M

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2005-01-02 06:33 PM

Yes... lovely. Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2005-01-19 10:33 PM

"...between the woods and frozen lake...."

Yes...just so, just so. You have a true gift for building scintillating imagery into tiny bursts of words.....

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Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2005-01-20 07:26 PM

Gifted indeed!

Another gem, John!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2005-01-21 10:27 PM

nodding agreement

extraordinary in the simplicity

just like the subject

a study of quiet contrasts and I do enjoy the stillness of your thoughts shared.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2005-01-21 11:20 PM

Enjooyed...James

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

9 posted 2005-01-21 11:39 PM

I see the poetry of wordless images, some breathtaking others fallow, enjoyed

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

10 posted 2007-04-28 02:18 AM

ha, an early one. now you rarely use look-see-said.

beauiful.

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