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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Are our avenues so well lit Is all respect for stern Rome lost that from the catacombs Christians come to spread their gentle creed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You continue to give your gentle poems female names... which finds no fault, indeed... but you have me wondering why? |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Sunshine, I am not creative. It is more accurate to say that I am reflective. This particular writing was a response to a woman who, though having no business purpose, used to come up from her below street level office in the building where we both worked to visit and talk with me. I seem to be influenced by the Eternal Feminine when and as I have the chance to experience her. I’m really not interested in my self. Thanks for reading. John |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Always so interesting to see what you write... and then, after pondering over it, to see exactly what it is about. You write softly, and it echoes well on these pages, I believe.  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"I’m really not interested in my self."???? not only your poem but yourself is a puzzle as well. why? and it is not true anyway...because you fought with me which proved that you were very well self protet and self-respect and have a big ego... huge ego is what i want to say. still a great man though. |
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