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Open Poetry #34
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-01-06 01:58 AM


there you are—

a shade of blue
on white snow
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-01-06 05:16 AM

how short and powerful!
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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2 posted 2005-01-06 01:47 PM

oh yes John, this is exactly what I'm talking about.  Challenge very well met sir!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-01-06 01:53 PM



Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2005-01-10 12:14 PM

I really liked this John.  

inspiring....

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2005-01-10 12:21 PM



M
Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-28 02:47 AM

why do  you take Blueskaya out?

nice little poem.
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