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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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The snow rests thick and white on distant roofs. A white mist fills the air. Light falls as now reveals the white house, the life I might have lived. A woman in the kitchen makes a meal. The kids tell Dad of their day in school. At night, the man, with his wife, lies in bed, amid the silence of white walls. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ at how peaceful your words seem M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Another beauty for the challenge Huan, you have captured the essence of the challenge well and your posts reflect it. Thank you for the wonderful offering.  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Your words felt like silk Juju |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nicely met challenge |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
this is lovely - I will look forward to reading more of your work |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the life we don't have, we always want but the grass isn't always greener, no |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 like a voyeur... great stuff. I still watch with envy when I see a little girl with a loving father...ah yes, the life we might have had... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
life...a play whoever in it |
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