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Morning |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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A dream gone What life is lost To the dead of night The dawn sun Red in the Eastern sky A blue haze On new snow The door closed With an opened eye With whom did I spend The silent hours |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, John! |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this is ****ing beautiul |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmm..with whom, yes nicely done M |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Good read. :-) |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
A dream gone What life is lost---------life To the dead of night------dead, night The dawn sun-----------dawn Red in the Eastern sky ---red A blue haze--------------blue On new snow--------------white The door closed------closed With an opened eye---opened With whom did I spend The silent hours ---all beautiful but lonely. |
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