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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2005-01-04 08:55 AM

i brushed my only taste away.
colors
wrong for their undesirable thrill
to touch a fading tongue.
how to hide
the primitive smiling lack…  of feel,
so full of pure drive to ignore the same?

and then

my patience swooned
in the horizontal separation
of new lips.
a touch
lined by deviation
of time
veiled in softness of mortality.

hand me the cover of hot palms…
i’ll bury
my will in the wait to ignore

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-04 10:16 AM

Wheel this one around
again...

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2005-01-13 12:59 PM

Exactly so....

That was my response, and then I kept writing....until I stopped and decided to post it....which I'll do in a moment. Meanwhile I've got to say to you....

You are doomed to be misunderstood, but fated for quality -- never forget that for a moment. You couldn't write an ineffective poem if you tried, and weakness is quite beyond your strength. You can't get down that far with an aqualung.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-13 05:31 AM

I can't believe I missed this earlier *sigh*

this made me close my eyes and tilt my head back to think a minute

good piece

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-13 11:49 AM

...

I knew this would inspire someone...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

5 posted 2005-01-13 02:13 PM

pandonov

I can see why Ed is inspired by your poetry.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-01-13 03:12 PM

And words to not. *S* As always... I enjoy your work so much! *S*

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2005-01-13 03:14 PM

always evocative, excellent post petre

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-13 07:00 PM

I love your writing!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2005-01-13 07:09 PM

WOW!

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

10 posted 2005-01-14 01:43 AM

You know very well what I'd say if I'd had the initiative to say it, and then, maybe you'd love me or hate me.

You know?

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2005-01-14 03:43 PM

Magnificent!....absolutely!

it's a

M

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2005-01-18 03:05 PM

Outstanding!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2005-01-18 03:12 PM

superb and sublime

love reading you....excellent writing

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

14 posted 2005-01-18 09:41 PM

always sparse but intense

and as always, worth reading and pondering

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

15 posted 2005-01-25 04:53 PM

thank u all. not sure what u mean exactly Meg

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

16 posted 2005-01-26 09:07 AM

Such stark images, but finely juxtaposed. Well done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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