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Ratleader
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0 posted 2005-01-13 12:59 PM


it can be exactly so....
and is for me
unless I flail change
risk sonorous
          mediocrity

remember
necessity winds the charm
with              care

one
  tiny misalign
   gears
           bind

to get the music out
put music
           in

but only
      only
if you want the tune

we don't, and yet
      we do
matched yet
            strange
we two




Started by this one....
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...you get me goin', bro....you really do.

© Copyright 2005 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2005-01-13 01:07 AM


I guess it takes two to tango?
Good one Mr. Ratleader.

JL

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2 posted 2005-01-13 01:11 AM


He's one of our best....so hard to understand, but so easy to comprehend once you realize that cognition isn't necessary...feel, balance, intuit....don't think outside the box, stand up on it and look toward the horizon. Pandonov's out there, as far from the box as the eye can see.

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3 posted 2005-01-13 05:38 AM


yes! I agree!

I've always been fond of him...I hope he reads this write of yours that he inspired

Martie
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4 posted 2005-01-13 11:39 AM


Ed

"to get the music out
put music
           in

but only
      only
if you want the tune"

This is so intriguing...I'm very glad you were so inspired.  

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5 posted 2005-01-13 11:49 AM




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6 posted 2005-01-13 03:09 PM


one
  tiny misalign
   gears
           bind

I dithered a while over which lines to highlight... a pleasant task indeed since it allowed many readings. *S* I like this very much... This is PIP at its finest... one poet inspiring another... both giving us treasures. *S*

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7 posted 2005-01-13 03:14 PM


Great write!

Eric

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8 posted 2005-01-13 06:59 PM


I enjoyed this so much!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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9 posted 2005-01-13 07:11 PM


Agreed.  Thoughtful write; much enjoyed, RatL.   ......jo
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10 posted 2005-01-15 10:14 AM


Wonderful Ed have missed reading your words.....

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that walks beside me
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11 posted 2005-01-18 03:04 PM


to get the music out
put music
           in

but only
      only
if you want the tune
wonderful write Ed.

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12 posted 2005-01-19 11:00 AM


This is excellent.  What can I say? It moves.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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13 posted 2005-01-26 04:13 AM


thank you Rat  and it's a nice poem too
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14 posted 2005-01-26 05:35 AM


thank you Rat snd the poem is pretty cool too
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15 posted 2005-01-26 05:39 AM


don't know why I can't see the mess. i'm typing here. sry for responding twice if i did
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16 posted 2005-01-26 05:40 AM


LOL = can't count the number of times I've done that -- and I don't wanna!

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17 posted 2005-01-26 09:08 AM


to get the music out
put music
           in

but only
      only
if you want the tune

Ed, I loved the write, but the above lines are magic!  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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