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Open Poetry #33

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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-07-16 09:35 AM

black waves whirl like bats
surrounding my sand castle
remember, and drown

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-16 10:07 AM

are they good black waves or bad ones?

I hope they're good ones, nothing like drowning in the depth of the sea...intoxicating! Besides, I'd hate for you to experience any bad ones...it's
Friday and everyone should be happy!

Hugs and smiles sent to ya

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2004-07-16 11:03 AM

Ouch. I hope this is just an image and not reality.  Excellent imagery.  This one will be rewinding in my head for a long time.  The power behind that pen is as potent as the strength behind the washing waves.  Take care,
           misc'e

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-07-16 11:17 AM

JaimeLove~
I know those tidal waved memories~

Poignant ... keeper~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-07-16 12:38 PM

Jamie

An emotional crash of words!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-16 12:43 PM

wow

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2004-07-16 01:19 PM

Even when your images are this stark, you weave a poignancy into them... This is excellent, my friend!

And I wonder which is worse... drowning... or starving to death for lack of anything worth remembering. *S*

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