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Open Poetry #33

Resistence is futile

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2004-07-13 07:51 AM

My heart is taken captive
it lost...
..........against a feel

I feel it,
growing..
taking over,
brainwashing each
drop of blood
that flows
through me

Resistence is futile
Even if
I wanted to win
against this,
to keep
those butterflies from
flying
through my veins ,
even then
I still
would
lose...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2004-07-13 12:05 PM

Know the emotion! This is a great write! Enjoyed!

JL

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-07-13 12:40 PM

let the butterflies fly on

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-07-14 07:01 PM

I like this -- I know this. Thanks for sharing.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

4 posted 2004-07-14 07:16 PM

Maybe this time you'll WIN!

Let those butterflies take flight!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

5 posted 2004-07-16 03:25 AM

Hi zenny, and I must admit..being an avid Star Trek fan, the title just drew me in!!! And after reading, I'm so glad it did...this is lovely, my friend...~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-07-16 03:28 AM

Yep, zenny, sometimes it just is! Enjoyed! ....jo

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2004-07-16 05:00 AM

had me from the title...good stuff

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

8 posted 2004-07-16 02:35 PM

Thanks for replying, my dear poetic friends

All of your words touched my heart

i like the butterflies, future will tell what happends to them, i guess

hehe

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