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tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-07-07 12:50 PM

That guy I fell in love with,
is that guy that calls right back just to say "I love you", one last time.

That guy I fell in love with,
is the one that softly kisses my lips,
then wispers in my ears the promises of tomorrow.

That guy I fell in love with,
is the one that made me be me.
No matter what the price.

That guy I fell in love with,
is the one who will lie in bed with me,
and won't ask for anything more.

Where is he now?

He is right in front of me,
saying "I love you",
kissing my lips,
telling me to be me,
and not wanting any more than that.

love will make you beautiful

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-07 09:00 AM

very sweet

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

2 posted 2005-07-07 01:12 PM

I love it! it's how i want something just starting in my life to go! thanks for a great read x x

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

3 posted 2005-07-07 01:25 PM

wow i really like the message. that's really good.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2005-07-11 07:20 AM

are you living my life??????? coz im having the same thing happening now too.... well written and it feels soooo good doesnt it....
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

5 posted 2005-07-11 08:15 AM

Omg...so not where i thought this one was going...Awesome change from the norm. I love it!

<3

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

6 posted 2005-07-11 03:54 PM

aussie im not livin your life this is just the life i want lol lucky you!

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

7 posted 2005-07-22 03:23 AM

Great job! Thats exactly how i feel right now about someone! I liked this alot!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-07-23 01:17 AM

awww...amazing write laura!

I loved the ending!

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

9 posted 2005-07-23 01:34 AM

love ya alli thanks!

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

10 posted 2005-07-24 09:34 AM

THIS IS VERY CUTE

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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