Teen Poetry #7 |
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mt1624fan New Member
since 2005-07-17
Posts 1Big Lake, Tx, USA |
Ok, i wrote this poem from three of my most favorite songs... it kinda doesn't make sense to me, maybe because i know the beats in my head and they clash, but most people understand it, i did too at first but not so much now. Well here it is i hope you like and post back! Some days I sit staring out the window, Just watching as the world passes me by. Sometimes I think there's nothing to live for, I almost break down and cry. There's a lot I keep bottled up that Hurts deep inside of my soul. I feel I grow colder the older I grow. At times I feel like a soldier, Like my shoulders hold up so much But I'm strong and they won't budge, I'll never fall of fold up. Even If my collar bones crush or crumble, I will never slip of stuble. I feel like people don't understand me. They can't see my real side. But in reality my insecurities could eat me alive. I just want to let go of all the pain I've held For so long. Just feel like I'm somewhere I belong. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked it very much Welcome to Pip! please check your email for a special greeting! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karina~ I also enjoyed reading your poetic thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karina~ I also enjoyed reading your poetic thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
i enjoyed this keep posting LOVE NEEDS TO DIE |
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* shining star* Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76PA,USA |
Nice poem. I really liked it. |
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~*BayBee*~ Member
since 2003-04-09
Posts 65In The Clouds... |
I can really relate to this and its good to get your feelings out whether its from a song or not! I like your work and keep it up! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice first poem...I look foward to reading more from you! ~Alli~ |
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