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mt1624fan
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0 posted 2005-07-17 11:29 AM


Ok, i wrote this poem from three of my most favorite songs... it kinda doesn't make sense to me, maybe because i know the beats in my head and they clash, but most people understand it, i did too at first but not so much now. Well here it is i hope you like and post back!


Some days I sit staring out the window,
Just watching as the world passes me by.
Sometimes I think there's nothing to live for,
I almost break down and cry.
There's a lot I keep bottled up that
Hurts deep inside of my soul.
I feel I grow colder the older I grow.
At times I feel like a soldier,
Like my shoulders hold up so much
But I'm strong and they won't budge,
I'll never fall of fold up.
Even If my collar bones crush or crumble,
I will never slip of stuble.
I feel like people don't understand me.
They can't see my real side.
But in reality my insecurities could eat me alive.
I just want to let go of all the pain I've held
For so long.
Just feel like I'm somewhere I belong.

© Copyright 2005 Karina - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-18 01:14 AM


I liked it very much

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2 posted 2005-07-18 09:38 AM




Karina~



I also enjoyed reading your poetic thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2005-07-18 09:47 AM




Karina~



I also enjoyed reading your poetic thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

tearsoflove13762
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4 posted 2005-07-19 06:19 PM


i enjoyed this keep posting

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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5 posted 2005-07-19 07:47 PM


Nice poem. I really liked it.
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6 posted 2005-07-22 03:14 AM


I can really relate to this and its good to get your feelings out whether its from a song or not! I like your work and keep it up!
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7 posted 2005-07-23 01:11 AM


Very nice first poem...I look foward to reading more from you!

~Alli~

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