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Eye Thoughts (wranx's masquerade challenge)
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Eye Thoughts (wranx's masquerade challenge) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You dress me in eye thoughts remembrances of days when sigh songs were sung in shimmer moments spent listening to the quiet of your voice. I bask in the light of your mind gifts. A flicker of flame shines through the dark warming thought places, leaving a damp need of soothing and sating desires with lover sighs while languishing in your mind touch.... If I once again whispered~ would you remember? Revised for the challenge with thanks to Local Parasite for providing the link. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-14-2003 09:44 AM).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Wow I know who this is....and he is soooooo missed! you did him well... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
to easy hon, and yes...I miss him and his words very very much as I am sure many of us do! |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
You dance his mind very well. Extremely on target for the writer so missed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well done.... yes..an easy one due to the fact you carried the style and the voice well... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'm very happy that someone chose our missing poet Dark Stranger (if indeed, this is who you dress as). Thanks much for playing along, and By the way! The poem is wonderful. Ed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indeed when one dresses in the dark of the stranger life is viewed in a totally different light. Thank you Ed for the enjoying and for remembering one of our friends and one of the best.... Yes, he is missed sorely....his words and friendship... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Before my time, so I just enjoyed it as a poem....the second half of the challenge, I think! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh song sung... indeed. smiling, and remembering.   |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am not very good at removing these masks, but I certainly did enjoy your poem, Donna!  Have a great day, my friend!  Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I"m with Linda on this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I haven't heard about this challenge but will check it out, yay! (kiss on cheek) You always write with heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Donna, sadly I arrived after they did but My goodness what a beautiful write *smile* xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ This is SO GOOD~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I must have arrived after he did, too, but I did enjoy your poem.  Hugs Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
those who missed being around during his time..should check out his poems ( mostly in mature)...I am surprised you managed to do one that was ok for open  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Donna..I read this with smile eyes. Yes his words are missed here in the blue pages. You portrayed him well. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks to all and I am so very glad that you enjoyed. As M~ said, anyone who did not have the opportunity to read our fellow poet and friend Dark Stranger/Owg should check out his poetry it is definately one of a kind and can never be imitated. Hugs to all. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He does have his very unique and accomplished way of painting a scene. I would say, you are an apt and fine reader of such a poet... Well done. |
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