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The show must go on(Wranx's masquerade challenge)
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The show must go on(Wranx's masquerade challenge) |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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The world is a stage We hide behind our "face masks" Never showing truth paladin ....a knight without armor [This message has been edited by paladin (11-14-2003 09:38 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
truth is shadows play walls of cave have shimmering-- let the curtain fall.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I only pray that the audience can identify the lies as dramatic irony is what we all really need here! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a marvelous challenge response, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Paladin, thanks for playing along. I'm gonna need to digest this for awhile. But, I will say that this is a very tight little Senryu. Well thought out...well crafted. Ed Ok, I've digested, and it would seem that the icebox is lurking nearby... Nice! [This message has been edited by wranx (11-15-2003 12:21 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok I am completely fooled paladin I was going to say Raph . . . beautiful senyru (how did you get that , Ed? sheesh) xxoo |
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