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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-11-13 12:23 PM

Blind heart walking into oblivion
underneath the eyes of cold reality
kissing the pale lips of fate
calculated embrace
dancing mindlessly in the shadows
of dark imagination
the wind blows
snuffing candle's last light
cold steel
shatters my reality
lifeless, loveless shell
crying in a corner.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-11-13 12:27 PM

Well done once again Brad!
You're on a roll!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-11-13 12:30 PM

thank you for reading

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-13 12:36 PM

gawd! this is sad-lonely

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-11-13 12:50 PM

thank you

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-11-14 07:33 AM

very thought provoking wirte, and how words, emotions, moods, etc. can so effect the ones we love. Good lesson here, for me anyway, thanks muches.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-11-14 08:56 AM

thank you!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-11-14 08:58 AM

"kissing the pale lips of fate"

Loved that line!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

8 posted 2003-11-14 09:12 AM

thank you

KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

9 posted 2003-11-14 09:54 AM

damn...

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-11-14 09:57 AM

enjoyed

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

11 posted 2003-11-15 11:13 AM

As I finished the last glass of wine and the candles flickered their end, I do believe I slipped (his hers) mind. Good write. Reminded me of one awful night. THANKS.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-11-15 11:36 AM

(big hugggssssssss) This is sad but beautiful, dearest friend, know that every end has a new beginning as unexpected as a public service announcement! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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