Open Poetry #29 |
Ringo's Other Girl |
Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Me again... My 10 y/o neice also wants to be just like her Uncle Bradly and write poetry. Here is her entry. MEAT SHOP I went to a meat factory And slipped on a piece Of old mouldy meat It was smelly and fuzzy Just like Nanny's feet I landed on my head Why am I in bed? Where is my friend Even I think I'm in heaven All because of that piece of mouldy meat Here is her cousin's (my daughter) work) /pip/Forum82/HTML/001190.html [This message has been edited by Ringo (10-10-2003 11:49 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hardee har har! What a hoot! What a sense of humor--and imagination! I guess the nut didn't fall too far from family tree!--and that's a good thing! to you both! Earth Angel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Makes me think of the slapstick physical comedy...cute one. Love the 2 girls imaginations. Love, Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad? *smile* hmmm wonder where they get it from? How very cool - what is her/their names and why dont they post more? Made me smile thank you (I tried the second link, it didnt work for me) Girls? keep writing, keep thinking (not too hard) and never ever lose your imagination xxoo |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Imagination's a great thing to have and it looks like they both have plenty of that.It'll take them far in life. Crystal |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can see the joy of writing runs in the family! We always love having young writers join us! Please see if your niece would like to sign up as a member Brad. Nicely done! ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Hehehe, both her and her cousin sure have had bad luck with lunch meat this week, hehehe! (smiles) Awwwwwww, both of these little girls have such wonderufl talent and I sure hope they post until their own screen-names here so we can see more of their beautiful heartfelt poems, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done and very humourous...another pip convert.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
and i am yet another avid fan of ur family's work. lol. Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So when are you going to attempt a tri-et? I think you all should get together.... and treat us to something hallowe'eny... |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
As I said in the other one, thanks to all... and Sunshine... I'm just gonna have to work on that Haloween ti-post... It would definately be interesting. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Man Bradly, don’t you guys have a zoo in town or at least a park or something?!? I mean smelly meat, like Nanny’s feet... Gawd! lol Has your poor Nanny read these yet??? What’s next week the Cheez Whiz Warehouse! Oh I get it, these places save you the cost of buying an actual lunch... This reminds me of a piece of Baloney I found way back in the refrigerator the other day... It had been there so long, it looked like a hairpiece, for a Ch Ch Ch Chia Pet! Man, these kids are my all time favorites! This is really precious Bradly! Richy |
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