Open Poetry #29 |
October’s Decent |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
October’s Decent yes, I am affected in the change of seasons and it has started as the sun has turned the other way "wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I am with you on this one... this poem said it all for me, and I think the ending is extraordinary! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I think we all are in one way or another, but there is always a promise for new beginnings... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the truth for me too..I have been complaining how much I am having trouble adjusting to the seasons change this year... *s M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
So am I! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee...I know this feeling well.. Love this! ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
....sigh *swoon* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I honestly make a conscious effort to get more light into my life during winter months... so I don't slink off into the darkness. *S* I like this very much, lady. *S* |
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Shawna Fitzgerald Junior Member
since 2003-10-09
Posts 11 |
that was touching i feal the sam way love, shawna |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
one of these days ill be the first to say somethin and itll be good but im always late and the good ones are taken so ill just agree with all the others We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
i hope you are affected pleasently. october is simply awesome. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Me, too, Helen...but I do so love this time of year....if it just wouldn't get colder. I love these temperatures. Hugs, Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Seasons change...every single day. The season that it is today can't have a name, because it has never been before and never will be again. It is the same with the seasons inside us. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lady~ You are some kinda' BEAUTIFUL~ I love the softness of you spilling down the page ... You remind me of the ocean's beaches, after the tide has come high, waiting for your new poetic footprints upon the shore~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
your work is just amazing... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very true, sweet friend, I always like my sun no matter what but I do like the colors and pleasant atmosphere of autumn! (sigh) May you always find your place in the sun, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"yes, I am affected in the change of seasons and it has started as the sun has turned the other way". . . and I relish the loss of it's heat for my night will be warmed by you Sorry slick, just had to! Loved it...j. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I like the way this poem hugs the side of the page, it makes the voice I read it a frail needful whisper. Yes, that's what this poem reminds me of, a whispered plea for sun and summer's return.... You're not alone there Loved this. Sherry |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - It must shine upon our southerly friends for a bit - Hunkering down here... |
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