Open Poetry #28 |
Weeds In The Graveyard |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Visiting many churches in Ireland, it truly broke my heart to see many graveyards filled with weeds and vines covering all the tombstones so the names of families couldn't be read, and seeing some other tourists take pictures of bones and show a lack of interest to the people who lived with them under their flesh. This poem kind of came out of tears I had seeing many of God's special places and the holy families who once ran them be neglected. I believe that everyone should have God or whoever their religion tells them to believe in have that holy spirit centered around them, as well as our families. ) Weeds In The Graveyard By: Noah Eaton 7/23/03 You kneeled before the abbey Before forgotten kings Treading upon rakes and weeds in the graveyard Praying for the gardener To come and secure their honor And match your ears with the Savior... You believed in white magic Held the pendant in your hand Spent the years groundskeeping But denying your heritage and your land Holding up a sword and shield Fought the concept of time defensively While the kudzu vines grew Finding those memorials you once knew buried... You put all your blame on God But you know what you've wrought You wished for those to rest in peace When you disturbed them in their sleep... You kneeled before the abbey Before forgotten kings Treading upon rakes and weeds in the graveyard Praying for the gardener To come and secure their honor And match your ears with the Savior... Here lies the opened doors of the crypt Anyone is welcome to come in Go on and touch the fingers Of the corpses and take pictures if you wish I dare not look at their bones Somehow I find that sacrilege It feels like castrating a dead horse When all our dead want to do is feel well-rested... You put all your blame on God But you know what you've wrought You wished for those to rest in peace When you disturbed them in their sleep... You kneeled before the abbey Before forgotten kings Treading upon rakes and weeds in the graveyard Praying for the gardener To come and secure their honor And match your ears with the Savior... You kneeled before the abbey Before forgotten kings Treading upon rakes and weeds in the graveyard Praying for the gardener To come and secure their honor And match your ears with the Savior... Still I feel the slow burn Every time I see an empty church With hands and arms surrendering to universal coupling And legs sold to menial work Still there will always be a curate In charge of every parish A rector appointed as managerial And a vicar there to maintain the communion Every candle shall be lit Every bell shall be rung Every priest will have his hands Consoling and comforting the righteous ones Every psalm will be read once more The collection plate will make profit Our teachers will have something to teach And preachers something to transmit And don't forget to baptize yourself At least one time in your life It might not be enough But you've got to hold some light And for all you know Soon will come the day of judgement I believe in it with all my soul But is anyone willing to pull these wedds? Who will pull these weeds... I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-09-2003 04:59 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly sad Noah...so sad that the final resting places of so many have been left unattended. It's great to have you back here sidekick.. You have been missed. Welcome Home! ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is so beautiful. I am always touched in old graveyards. Did you go to Ireland recently? How wonderful. Sandra |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
that is really sad but this was a great poem I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away, |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Noah, through your poems, I can say that I too have been to Ireland (well... almost -- they sure make for a great slide-show!). It's neat to see someone so inspired by experience and eager to share it with others... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
must be a wonderful place to visit and share your experiences with the rest of us, the old grave sites have a unique character where one can visit an ancester and contemplate on why we're here...be well my friend [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-09-2003 11:11 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, I do so appreciate you sharing your trip to the Emerald Isle with us. This poem took us off the beaten path and gave us another view. So authentic feeling--I could hear the bones speak! Linda |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Noah, my friend I am soooo glad that you're home. I'm glad, too, that you are sharing these great poems of your vacation in Ireland. Even though this one is sad, it's so well written it's beautiful. Thanks, Noah. Hugs to you Ethel |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Your loving and compassionate heart shines through as always in this..... How very sad!!!!! Beautiful writing Noah!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully sad and touching, dear Noah! You should send this poem to the Administrator of that place. Graveyards are really THE place where we ponder about the fleeting moment we spend here ... I agree, to honor the dead is important and their resting place should be well-attended, even though our beloved ones continue to live in our hearts. Your sensitive soul shines so bright, dear friend. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
You speak the truth and are so wise. Lovely tribute here for YOU did not forget. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
thankyou Noah it was just lovely ,yet profound arthur |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Your sincerity and love shines thourgh in this, just as you do shows. angelblueyes |
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