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The day is spent
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The day is spent |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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The day is spent And the night is on… The wind blows swirling about us Maroon and morose Making us turn from the stinging sands of our disparate histories To face a new direction Where chimera hangs low on the horizon like an unformed thought I put my face to the veil of lace that obscures the glimmer that hides in her eyes It comes away shimmering upon my brow and my beard As if I’d walked into the webbing of the most artful spiders And I exhort her to follow through the storm broken night to a heady and humid place Where I can administer my hell-gained proclivities exploring her resilience with benevolent intent Til the night is spent… [This message has been edited by wranx (05-10-2003 07:35 AM).] |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Nice Eliza Simmons |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo-Hoo! Go, wranx! Can't decide which of these shimmering images I like best. Powerful piece of writing, this. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
More than nice. This is the grace of man's yearning. TOTAL beauty. Damn, yeti... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
utter peace of mind . . . tranquil lucidity beautiful Ed . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, continue on writing and I will continue sitting here with my mouth hanging open |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Slowly, this puts the reader there in the sands even the sirocco is felt as the winds shift time. Thank you Wranx. First read of the morning, now I feel ready to smile at the day. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you did it again, Ed, left me windswept, in awe of the layers of love your pen unveils |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
hot stuff there ed...wow !!! h |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Great write Ed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Keep 'em comin'!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Beautiful... Amore H |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
you never cease to amaze me...you know my words always fail me...*goes back to her corner* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ooh! I like the way this one twists and turns. Very much the way men and women make love, or shall I say lust? Cor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my! This is wonderful...much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write, it held my attention It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wranx....painted like the artist you are! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for giving me the chance to read such a fine piece of writing. Marilyn. |
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Second Self Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 15 |
Wow, very nice! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . I have always loved portraits . . . |
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