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Lullaby |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lullaby I'll sing you a lullaby so smooth and tenderly upon a stream of caressin’ love I hold you near to me. I cradle you on my lap your head against my chest a tiny thumb into your mouth you need a little rest . Your eyes become so heavy now from fairies’ sleepy sand warm feelings fills my heart you're safe in loving hands A gentle kiss on both your eyes oh how I enjoy your face within a smile of Angel's bliss captured it all in my embrace. I'll sing for you a lullaby so smooth and tenderly always sing this song for you whenever you need love from me. ~*Theresia~* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this is absolutely beautiful, my friend! But yours always are, and I am always delighted to find you here to read! A great addition to the new book!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
nothing beats a mother's love this made me remember all those countless hours spent rocking my son...sigh...love this |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this is a beautiful poem and truly a lullaby.. it made me want to fall into my pillow and sleep.. yet I wanted to keep reading.. and listening to this smooth tune. Wonderful! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a delicate touch you used on these words, Charisma...beautiful |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this is such a gorgeous lullabye that can bring anyone to sleep, yay, such a perfect bedtime smile is nperfect for the new book, woo-hoo, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma~ This is so softly and tenderly penned. I absolutely love it...beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice. Enjoyed the read. Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Very pretty writing, Charisma. We'd all love to hear a lullaby now and then, even if we're a bit too old for it. Thank you for the lovely sentiments. Parasite |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poems brings back warm memories of my own babies. The warmth, the complete and udder joy (excuse me, I meant "utter" joy! tehe), the feeling of completeness... and the wonderful sights and sounds--and smells --Johnson's baby soap, baby powder...I choose to forget the unpleasant ones! A loving poem that brings loving thoughts to its readers. Warm hugs, EA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you all so much for reading, I am truly happy that you enjoyed the read. [This message has been edited by Charisma (02-18-2003 06:20 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ As lovely a read as I had hoped for~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so pretty, Charisma. I love it...... Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-18-2003 06:06 PM).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh...you make me miss my grandbaby!! Beautiful, just beautiful. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Charisma, Do I ever love this... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This was just so lovely Charisma Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I had to pick this one....beautiful!!!! Bridgette |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your eyes become so heavy now from fairies’ sleepy sand warm feelings fills my heart you're safe in loving hands A gentle kiss on both your eyes oh how I enjoy your face within a smile of Angel's bliss captured it all in my embrace. ================================ An ethereal beauty Poetess Charisma... sing on!! "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Charisma...much enjoyed. It's got my vote! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
absolutely lovely Maree. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh now as a Gramma you know I am loving this one. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Charisma - Your write is belonging within the pages of this book... My vote for you... BC |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet...i enjoyed the feeling in this one... hugs, g "laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Well ... let's just say B U M P ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sweet |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A perfect choice. Every book needs a lullaby THis one is lovely Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A very lovely song, Charisma... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful expression of a mother's love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma Thought I voted for this, well I have now. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
All kinds'a love out there, isn't there? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
So bright, so beautiful, so precious. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent work my friend. . . so good to see you again. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I don't know how I missed this. My kind of poetry. Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just like music...I can hear it |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
The visual of a mother rocking her child, singing this lullabye... Absolutely! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So gently beautiful... I like this very much! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well you can rock me to sleep anytime you want to LOL. Seriously, this is a beautiful lullaby. Mother's have that certain gift when it comes to things such as this and your love shines brightly here. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Theresia, this is so comforting and sweet. I love lullaby poems. ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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