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Sometimes, when the lights are out |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sometimes, when the lights are out, I sit in the dark and wait. Waiting for thoughts to fill my head, dreaming about what to do, with a million bucks. Being rich should give you some happiness they say. Money...will it help to get a better life? Sometimes I wonder, because happiness has to be within, within oneself. Happiness you must create, it's not given. But if you just sit and wait... a million bucks won't help I guess. So here I sit when the lights are out. Sometimes I'm happy, sometimes I wish I had a million bucks. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Titia, this is so very true, sweet friend, everything that is only temporary is not true happiness, happiness must be something ever so fluent that it consumes your heart forever and money is by far the opposite of that! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, I love it, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-17-2003 07:38 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yep... the truth in this deserves to be read... got my vote... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cute write Titia..gets my vote! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Nice! My vote. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, dutchie...these words ring so true. You show your humanity in these words...very nice. voting here!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Boy if I had a million bucks I would be over there under those beautiful skys of yours Titia! Loved your thoughts, you are such a kind lady (seems to me your Mom is too). |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think you must have been looking up at my window... or at least reading my mind. *S* This is wonderful, Titia... I like it very much! *S* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Love this, Titia. If I had a million bucks, I'd share it with my favorite Dutchie. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Titia, I like this. It makes you think. You're right, though....I don't think money can buy happiness, but it sure would make us feel better sometimes..LOL Heart Hugs, and my vote, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Titia! I do the same thing! I love to sit on my bed in the dark and wait for new thoughts and ideas to float gently into my mind...and it would even be better if I had a million dollars stuffed under my mattress! Delightful write from a delightful pen! Love & Light, Linda |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Titia, I enjoyed this one. The older I get the less I want a million bucks. The things I want don't cost that much anymore. Iced tea in the summer and someone to share it with, really. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh me too, but I'd probably spend it all in about a week. Love this! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Too true! But isn't most of the fun in the dreaming? When you think you have heard it all, |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Titia, Yes, this is true. But I don't think a million bucks could make a better you! Well, done. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
oops, here's my vote. SG |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Me too, me too. This gets my vote. Joyce |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you dear friends. It's 4.00 am overhere and I'm on the edge of wanting a million bucks, so I wouldn't have to go to work tomorrow LOL Thanks for all the votings Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Titia I wish I had a million pounds to go with your million bucks so we would have double the amount anyway lovely writing. Beautiful work. I am also voting for this. Very well written love and warm stuff as always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wish away, but the absolute will be you're getting in the book! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Titia darling one, what better way to ensure the book has some brilliant poems in than to vote for this superb poem. Do you know that this is such a pearl of wisdom, just the words to remind us of what is important and what isn’t I love it utterly utterly utterly, but of course YOU know that. One of your utterly utterly perfect timed poems And a resounding YES vote for the book As always Mushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Me, too...sometimes I think money would solve all the problems...but I would be happy with sharing my million...0ne tenth would be plenty for me hugss ~A~/M |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So - If you had a million bucks.. Could I ask for a loan?.. Cute, Titia... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Krissy dear, if we could share our million pounds and bucks, I think we would stay in Florida forever, I happen to remember a certain person at the airport who's looks you must have imprinted well after driving along a hundred times Sunshine, if I'm in the book, I don't need a million bucks, I'll have a million friends around me. Marsha, glad to see you again dear, because you always make me blush. Alicethruglass, I would settle for that too. Nan, he he I would come to Cape Cod every half year to party with you dear. But alas, as I just found out, they passed my million bucks to someone else again. I only got 5, well that's better than nothing. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hi ya Titia. This poem reminds me of: Blessed are the poor, for they still have hope that money will make them happy. Nicely phrased poem, with a great ending that ties everything together. Another vote in the affirmative. |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
No bucks but a big kiss from your Mom. |
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